Opowiadanie do sprawdzenia

naatttaa · Postautor: **naatttaa** » 21 mar 2009, 19:13

That was a gloomy Monday morning. On outside rain. I a lot don't wanted went to school , however musted because had test from Maths.Took umbrella and went on stop Bus. After moment arrived a bus . In bus made a homework from maths. Day in school was nice. On break of Lunch noticed in a canteen pretty boy. Turn out , that is new to school . Asked me and my friend , if can sat down next to (nas). Of course let (mu) on it. Adrian very liked me. When finished break to Lunch . Came back to lessons. Still thought about Adrian. mrs to art be illed , so don't had last lesson . Went to Bus stop , then came Adrian and offer , that saw me to house. I agree.In road spoke.
Turn out, that Adrian Lived on the same as street as I. Finally Adrian confession me love. From the on passed one year. Still myself be in loved . This day had horrible , had gorgeous.

(Ps. Pisałam to dwie godziny , ale nie jestem pewna czy dobrze )
Jest to opowiadanie , więc musi być w czasie Past Simple .

Nicoleaaaa · Postautor: **Nicoleaaaa** » 21 mar 2009, 22:32

Poprawiłam to, bo miałaś bardzo dużo błędów. :beksa:

Oto moja wersja (poprawiona):

It was a gloomy Monday's morning. It was raining outside. I didn't want to go to school however I musted because I had a test in Maths. I took an umbrella and I went to Bus Stop. After a while the bus has arrived. I made my homework in the bus. The day in school was nice. When was a break for lunch I noticed in a canteen a handsome boy. It turned out that he was new in our school. He asked me and my friend if he could sit next to us. (Zauważ to mowę zależną!!! Przytaczając czyjeś słowa a mowie zależnej musisz zmienić czas, czego Ty nie zrobiłaś :book:

!!) Of course we let him do it. Adrian very liekd me. Then the break for lunch was over. We had to came back on lessons. I still was thinking about him. Mrs Nowak, arts teacher, was ill so I didn't have a last lesson. I went to Bus Stop once again. Suddenly Adrian came to me and suggested that he could take me home. I agreed. It turned out that Adrian was living on the same street as me. Suddenly that boy confessioned me his love to me. Now passed one year since we got to know. We love all the time. This day was amazing and goregous.

Pozdrawiam xxxx

arli · Postautor: **arli** » 22 mar 2009, 2:59

Ja znalazłam jeszcze parę błędów.

It was a gloomy Monday's morning. It was raining outside. I didn't want to go to school however I had to because I had a Maths test. I took an umbrella and I went to Bus Stop. After a while the bus had arrived. I did my homework in the bus. The day in school was nice. During the break for lunch I noticed a handsome boy in a canteen . It turned out that he was new in our school. He asked me and my friend if he could sit next to us. Of course we let him do it. Adrian liked me very much. Then the break for lunch was over. We had to come back on lessons. I was still thinking about him. Mrs Nowak, arts teacher, was ill so I didn't have the last lesson. I went to Bus Stop once again. Suddenly Adrian came to me and suggested that he could take me home. I agreed. It turned out that Adrian lived on the same street as me. Suddenly that boy confessed that he loved me. It's a year since we got to know. We love all the time. That day was amazing and goregous.

volord2 · Postautor: **volord2** » 20 gru 2019, 22:11

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vlord · Postautor: **vlord** » 06 cze 2022, 11:28

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