Witam,
Mam pracę z angielskiego na jutro. Esej z tematem "Boys and girls should be educated separately".
Napisałem ją i proszę was o sprawdzenie. Tylko mam ją na jutro więc prosiłbym bardzo o sprawdzenie jeszcze dziś.
Z góry dzięki i pozdrawiam
Oto praca:
Should boys and girls be educated separately?
There is a lot of opinion about educating boys and girls separately. Some people think that it’s better than educate together. In my opinion it should be prohibited to learn boys and girls separately.
First of all, In our life boys and girls friendships are very important. Most of people want to have wife or at least girlfriend. And how we can socialize with opposite sex person if we haven’t got contact with opposite sex in our childhood? First time we create opposite-sex friendship is In primary school. Have you ever think what consequences there will be if there were only single-sex school? There are going to be much less marriages, because we cant meet our sweetheart at school. The result is that there will be less children. The effect is that there will be less people on the world. The result of it is that our species will extinct in few hundred years. Do we want this?
On the other hand, boys & girls will learn more, because there won’t be boys-girls relationships. People won’t meet, so there will be more time for learning. The effect is that there will be much more geniuses & more high-educated people.
But if the people will extinct in few hundred years, what for we need this educated people? What for we need intelligent people if our species can be endangered?