A strange encounter

anetka124 · Postautor: **anetka124** » 28 lis 2009, 21:35

A strange encounter
It was late evening, when Kate, seventeen years old student, came back home grom school. She was want in home how the most quickly, so she chose short cut through dark forest.
Unfortunetely her flashlight unload in half of road home. Full moon lighted her road, but unconsiously she went wrong from road.
Suddenly she heard strange rustle in bushes ahd sameone or something began her chasig. She felt on backs unknown cold breath, shivers passed her. Kate was terrifield, she feared but runned beore one another. Suddenly she tripped over branch and falled down. She turned in a hurry. She saw strange igure in light of moon, who looked a bit as a man but he was the huge bats of wing and wolf ’s tines. Kate watched creature in horror.
Suddenly form passed her hand abd helped to get up. Girl was a bit calmer but still amazed whole event. Creature had something strange in eyes, as like he wanted to say, that he helped her. Unknown take out her from forest. Kate came back home whole and safe. She was happy, that she came back home, but didn’t told abybody about whole incident. Kate already known, that wasn’t one should looked on appearance but this what someone has in heart.

eveline01 · Postautor: **eveline01** » 28 lis 2009, 23:39

anetka124 pisze:A strange encounter
It was late evening, when Kate, seventeen years old student, came back home grom school. She was want in home how the most quickly, so she chose short cut through dark forest.
Unfortunetely her flashlight unload in half of road home. Full moon lighted her road, but unconsiously she went wrong from road.
Suddenly she heard strange rustle in bushes ahd sameone or something began her chasig. She felt on backs unknown cold breath, shivers passed her. Kate was terrifield, she feared but runned beore one another. Suddenly she tripped over branch and falled down. She turned in a hurry. She saw strange igure in light of moon, who looked a bit as a man but he was the huge bats of wing and wolf ’s tines. Kate watched creature in horror.
Suddenly form passed her hand abd helped to get up. Girl was a bit calmer but still amazed whole event. Creature had something strange in eyes, as like he wanted to say, that he helped her. Unknown take out her from forest. Kate came back home whole and safe. She was happy, that she came back home, but didn’t told abybody about whole incident. Kate already known, that wasn’t one should looked on appearance but this what someone has in heart.

It was late evening when Kate, a seventeen year old student, came back home from school. She wanted to be at home as quickly as possible so she chose a short cut through a dark forest...

A coz to jest ?? grom....

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anne22 · Postautor: **anne22** » 29 lis 2009, 3:08

Unfortunately, her flashlight unload in halfway home. Full moon lighted her road, but unconsciously she went wrong way.
Suddenly she heard strange rustle in bushes and someone or something began... (?). She felt unknown, cold breath on her back, shivers passed her. Kate was terrified, she feared, but runned before one another. Suddenly she tripped over a branch and falled down. She turned in a hurry. She saw a strange figure in the light of moon, which looked a bit as a man, but it has a huge bat's wing and wolf's tines. Kate saw such creature in a horror.
Suddenly the character passed her hand and helped her to get up. Girl was a bit calmer, but still amazed whole situation. Creature had something strange in its eyes, as like it wanted to say something which could helped her. It took her out from the forest. Kate came back home safe and sound. She was happy of coming back, but she doesn’t tell anybody about this incident. Kate has already known, that nobody should take notice only on appearance, that important is what someone has in one's heart.

za dużo powtórzeń słowka "suddenly"