from informal into formal

tomtom45 · Postautor: **tomtom45** » 14 kwie 2011, 22:42

Nie wiem za bardzo jak to ugryźc, może ktoś pomoże. Będę wdzięczny
change an informal argumentative text into a formal argumentative paragraph.

Main premise: The goverment should introduce tighter gun controls

Jack Spring thinks that everyone should have the right to own a gun but I don't agree with him. People like him think that the goverment is infringing our democratic rights when it restricts gun ownership. they think that most people who own guns are responsible citizens who keep the guns for sport and recreation. They also think that the police are unable to stop violent crime and we need guns to protect ourselves. But I think he's wrong. I agree with Josephine Bluff, who thinks that guns increase the amount of violent crime in the community. I also think that human life is worth more than sporting shooters right to go shooting on the weekend. And I also think that many of the guns that are kept around the house end being used in violent domestic disputes or teenage suicides.

Gość · Postautor: **Gość** » 16 kwie 2011, 8:55

Main premise: The government should introduce tighter gun controls

Jack Spring maintains that everyone should have the right to own a gun. This position asserts that the government is infringing our democratic rights when it restricts gun ownership. Most people who own guns, so this argument goes, are responsible citizens who keep the guns for sport and recreation. It is further contended that the police are unable to stop violent crime and we need guns to protect ourselves. However, as Josephine Bluff states, guns increase the amount of violent crime in the community. Moreover, human life is worth more than sporting shooters right to go shooting on the weekend. In addition, many of the guns that are kept around the house end being used in violent domestic disputes or teenage suicides.

Ja też nie wiedziałem jak to ugryzć. To co jest powyżej to znalazłem na internecie.

There are, of course, a number of ways you could order the arguments in your answer. You are correct if you:
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a. have placed the arguments that oppose the main premise in the first half of your paragraph
b. have used problematising phrases to mark the opposing statements as debatable and possibly untrue
c. have used a contrasting connective, such as "However", to mark where you are shifting from arguments that oppose your main premise to arguments that support your main premise
d. have used listing connectives, such as "Moreover", "Furthermore", and "In addition" to list the arguments that support your main premise

Gość · Postautor: **Gość** » 16 kwie 2011, 23:40

wielkie dzięki to już coś :hura:

volord2 · Postautor: **volord2** » 21 gru 2019, 20:23

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vlord · Postautor: **vlord** » 10 cze 2022, 10:57

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