Prosze o sprawdzenie fragmentu opowiadania

[Rufus]

I pushed open the door. The house was empty but I could see that someone had been there and had only just left.
I had been driving to visit my friend , who had recently bought a new house and had invited me to come over and see it, but I had gotten lost.
Luckily, I had spotted a big house from the road so I had decided to go over and ask for directions. It was dark inside...

[IraVehementi]

hm... zafascynowałeś się Past Perfect ;p Niepotrzebnie, w opowiadaniach najczęściej uż…ywa się Past Simple. I mam pewne wątpliwości, bo uważ…am, ż…e to są fragmenty z róż…nych części Twojego opowiadania. Po prostu nie składa się to w spójną całość.


I was driving to visit my friend, who had recently bought a new house and had invited me to come over and see it, but I got lost. Luckily, I spotted a big house from the road, so I decided to go and ask for directions. It was dark inside...
I pushed the door open. The house was empty, but I could see that someone had been there and just left.

Tak to chyba powinno wyglądać

PS. Widziałem Twój post na e-ang.pl

[Rufus84]

Nie. kolejnosc jest dobra. zaczyna sie:

"I pushed open the door. The house was empty but I could see that someone had been there and had only just left. "

Zadanie polega na tym aby napisac dalsza czesc opowiadania uzywajac czasu past perfect i past simple. Tak wiec jesli napisze:

"I had been driving to visit my friend , who had recently bought a new house and had invited me to come over and see it, but I had gotten lost.
Luckily, I had spotted a big house from the road so I had decided to go over and ask for directions."

...to opisuje wydarzenia przed: "I pushed open the door" wiec sa w past perfect. tylko nie wiem czy wszystkie czasowniki w tym fragmencie powinny byc.

A pozniej kiedy pisze: "It was dark inside" to juz w past simple bo to jest mniej wiecej w tym samym przedziale czasowym co "I pushed open the door"

[IraVehementi]

No ale chyba nie musisz uż…ywać Past Perfect w całym fragmencie. I nie zmienia to faktu, ż…e powinno być "I pushed the door open"

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