It was cold and rainy morning. Crowd of teenagers were waiting for a bus. When a coach arrived to school everyone was excited. “Ok sweetheart, now I check a list of member.” Utter Ms. Ken. While she ended check a list, teens went to the vehicle. Teacher was worry because one person wasn’t in a coach. The moment a teacher was wondering about late student, someone shouted behind her “Wait for me”. She saw a boy who was running to her. “Michael you are late, now take your place in coach” add women and got in the bus. Michael went to bus and sits near his friend Tom.
In the bus was noisy, everybody was excited this trip. It was a school trip to old castle. Rain didn’t stop fallen. Suddenly coach begin skid and hitted a tree. Michael woke up and glanced to his friends. Somebody started run away from coach. He stood up and did it too. He had cut head, but he was ok. Ms. Ken asks people if they are fine. A crash bus suddenly was on fire. Michael glimpsed at bus and saw there a few people. He remembers that in coach was fire-extinguisher. He quick run there, took the fire-extinguisher and begun put out a fire. In this time Ms. Ken calls to 911 and order a help. When he put out a fire, an ambulance and firefighters arrived.
It ends well, because everyone was saved. Ambulance took hurt people to hospital. Michael was a hero, he saved a few friends. Before trip in school he wasn’t a popular student, but now it changed.
Proszę o korektę.To moję pierwsze opowiadanie, więc trochę się gubiłem z czasami. Opowiadanie ma 270 słów, a powinno być 250, więc napiszcie co jest zbędne
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