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It was sunny day in Manchester, when Mike Greg and their friends were on a short, school trip. They were to go sightseeing and at the beginning everything went great. They arrived in Manchester from Glasgow. It was great atmosphere, everybody was joking.
‘ You have got free time to 2 o’clock, please be careful and don’t lose your way,’ one of the teachers said to them. Young people rarely obey and it was the same in this day. Mike and his friends don’t care about anything. Despite the fact that teachers prohibited going to pubs, his mates were curious and decided to come in one of them for a while. Mike wanted to stay outside. Everyone knows that forbidden fruit is sweetest. As it turned out it was good idea. There were two big men inside. One of them told to his friend ‘Bob, look, these children are looking for something!’ His ompanion answered ‘Let’s show them their place!’. He took off his T-shirt and wanted to hurt them! They were so scared! Their legs were numbing and they were not able to escape. Fortunately, Mike appeared at the right time and said ‘My dad is a president of this city, if you hurt my friends, you will go to a prison for a whole life!’. Surprisingly, these two men felt for that story and went away! When Mike and his friends went out from this pub, they burst out laughing. His classmates were in a danger but he helped him.
Fortunately, everything ended happily and teenagers went back to Glasgow joyful. Certainly, they didn’t say anything to teachers. As it turned out, sometimes it is better to obey.