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Re: prosba o sprawdzenie teks

Postautor: Visitor » 06 maja 2005, 14:15

Czy moze ktos sprawdzic ten tekst:
The civilization-related diseases, i.e. the disease of circulatory system are death cause in about 50% cases in Poland. In UK death of every fourth man and every fifth woman is caused of acute coronary syndromes (ACS). Reduction of percentage of death or disability is the most important task of emergency medicine.
The early diagnosis and identification of patients endangered of cardiogenic death permit the correct proceeding in the pre-hospitality period, that means at patients home or in the way to emergency unit, as well as it can give chance to make the time between presenting symptom and caused treatment shorter. It has very important effect on the prognosis.
Effectiveness of diagnosis and decreasing of number of undiagnosed cases (specially the cassis, they have non-standard course or symptom) is getting better thanks to the standardization of diagnosis of acute coronary syndromes (ACS) as well as to prevalence of biochemical markers of cardiac damage's research (e.g. troponin). Those factors connecting with correct access to hemodynamic laboratories and invasive cardiology units should give significant acute improvement coronary syndromes.
The efficietn operation of emergency medicine – the first link in chain of medical help for the best end effect is necessery.
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Re: prosba o sprawdzenie teks

Postautor: Visitor » 06 maja 2005, 14:49

are death cause in about 50% cases in Poland
are the cause of about 50% deaths in Poland

In UK death of every fourth man and every fifth woman is caused of acute coronary syndromes (ACS).
In UK every fourth death in men and every fifth in women are caused by ACS

Reduction of percentage of death or disability
Reduction in the number of deaths and disabilities

patients endangered of cardiogenic death
patients at risk of - check the word "cardiogenic"

or in the way to emergency unit,
or on the way

as well as it can give chance to make the time between presenting symptom and caused treatment shorter. It has very important effect on the prognosis.
This sentence is serously screwed-up, don't have time to correct it

(specially the cassis, they have non-standard course or symptom)
especially in cases of non-standard or asymptomatic course of disease

Hope I helped a little
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Re: prosba o sprawdzenie teks

Postautor: Visitor » 06 maja 2005, 15:01

Sliczne dzieki. a reszta oki?
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Re: prosba o sprawdzenie teks

Postautor: Visitor » 06 maja 2005, 17:57

as well as it can give chance to make the time between presenting symptom and caused treatment shorter
as well as shorten the time from presenting symptom till caused treatment, which significantly influence the further prognosis.
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