Czy ktos moż e na to zerknąć i ewentualniue poprawić błedy?

[elf19pl]

I had having a chat with my friend on the platform and keep waiting for the
train, than I saw that it was coming into the station. I looked at the
clock, and I understood that I have only five minutes left before my train
will leave. I had no more time to talk with my friend on the platform, so I
asked him, if he would help me with my bags. He answered that will help me
with pleasure, took my bags and we both entered the train. When finally I
have found my place, he asked me if I could call him when reach the
destination. I said that of course I will call him immediately when my train
will arrive Detroit. He went back to the platform, and we talk a little
through the window till train leaved the station.

Z gory bardzo dziękuje.

[Visitor]

train left the station

[Visitor]

I was having a chat with my friend on the platform while waiting for the train. Then I saw it pulling into the station. I looked at the clock and realized I had only five minutes left before my train would leave. I hadn't any time left for conversation with my friend, so I asked him if he would mind helping me with my bags. He answered that he would help me with pleasure. He took my bags and we both entered the train. After I finally had found my place, he asked me if I could call him when I reach the destination. I said that of coure, I would call him immediately when train arrives in Detroit. He then went back to the platform and we talked a little through the window until train left the station.

[xeo]

I said of course - albo cudzyslow "of course", albo trzeba by bylo napisac I agreed poprostu
he asked me if I could call him when I reach the destination - trzeba zmienic wszystkie czasowniki na reported
I would call him immediately when train arrives in Detroit - trzeba zmienic wszystkie czasowniki na reported + THE train
then nie zabardzo moze byc w tej pozycji w ktorej jest
conversation - A conversation

[Visitor]

chyba i tak go dostaniesz.

[xeo]

no jak to dlaczego ? bo rozmowy mozemy policzyc, mialem jedna rozmowe z mama, jedna z tata itd. razem dwie

[Visitor]

[xeo]

sprobuj jeszcze raz bo sie wyslal pusty

[vlord]

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