Napisałam esej biograficzny ale obawiam się ż
e narobiłam błędów. Ta praca jest niezbędna by wyjechać do Stanów za pośrednictwem biura studenckiego. Będę wdzięczna osobie która zerknie na moją pracę i wskaż
e mi co należ
y poprawić. Jeśli ktoś ma pomysł jakie mądre zdanie moż
na by jeszcze dodać, to prosze o wszelkie sugestie.
My name is Aneta. I come from Poland. I am 23 years old. I was born on August 8th 1983, in Radom.
I started my education at a local primary school in 1990 and I was studying there until 1998. During this time I was very active person. I was a member of school chorus. We often took part in school performances. Then I also started learning to play on guitar. I took part in many school competitions. I supplanted first place in biological competition and second place in ecological competition.
After primary school graduation, I attended Jan III Sobieski High School in Radom for four years. I liked my school very much and I participated fully in the life of the school. While I was learning there, I actively took part in many students’ unions. I often took part in various competitions, theatricals and matches. At High School I decided that I would be a teacher in the future. To check myself in this part I look after my neighbor’s son in my free time. I helped him to do homework, we read book together and I prepared meals for him.
At present, I am studying pedagogy at Academy of Special Education in Warsaw. I will graduate in 2007. I practiced at nursery school, school and common room for children. I have decided to work at the CCUSA camp because I really like spending time with children.
In August I got married. I have many duties. I tidy my house almost every day. I prepare meals, do the washing up, do the laundry, and do the ironing. I like when there is clean in it so housework gives me pleasure.
In Radom I have lived since childhood with my whole family. My mother is nurse and my father is an electrician. I have three younger brothers . I also have sister. She is studying economy in Radom. I always spent with them a lot of time. I took care of them when my parents were at work.
What can I say about myself? I am very active person. I have always enjoyed sports activities. I like riding a bike and swimming. I also enjoy traveling and meeting people. It is one of the reasons I have decided to work at the CCUSA camp.
I am a hard- working person. Twice a week I attend course in English. I am also reliable and reasonable. I often think about my future. To make sense of my life, I see a satisfying job.
Getting to the end of my essay, I would like to say that I am very kind, sociable and helpful person.
I think I will be an appropriate candidate to work in this program.