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Kelly:Hi Jack!I was wondering-would you like to go to the rock musical "Queen" tonight?
Jack:That sounds nice but I'm afraid I'cant.I've got to do homework.
Kelly:Jack,listen!I have two trickets.There is topping musical!The concert is begun about twenty'o clock in Club Explosion.You must go!
Jack:Well,I will make homework after concert the "Queen".Where we are meeting?
Kelly:I will wait at my hose about seventh in the evening.
Jack:Ok,Ihave take drinks?
Kelly:No,there is bar.
Jack:Very good.Bye!See you later.
Kelly!Bye!

[sunday]

Kelly:Hi Jack!I was wondering-would you like to go to the rock (dodalabym slowko "band") musical "Queen" tonight?
Jack:That sounds nice but I'm afraid I'cant.I've got to do (dodalabym "some) homework.
Kelly:Jack,listen!I have two tickets. There is topping musical (dalabym: It is the musical of the top shelf) !The concert BEGINS about EIGHT 'o clock in THE Club Explosion.You must go!
Jack:Well,I will DO homework after concert OF the "Queen" (albo: the Queen's concert).Where ARE WE meetING?
Kelly:I will BE waitING at my house AT about seven P.M.
Jack:Ok, SHALL I take SOME drinks?
Kelly:No,there is A bar.
Jack:Very good.Bye!See you later.
Kelly!Bye!

nie wiem co sadzisz o tych zmianach, ale tak mniej wiecej bym to zrobila :-)
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