please correct my essay on topic "What in your opinion makes city life better than country life"
thanks for all pieces of advice
Nowadays people want to live in a city because they think that life there is better than country life. I agree with that opinion and I will try to show some reasons of that phenomenon.
There is no denying that in the city there is a greater access to entertainment. There are a lot of cinemas, theatres, discos, museums and other places where people can spend their free time together. There is also greater possibility of using sport facilities for example swimming pools, skating rinks and fitness centres.
Another thing is that, in the city people have a better choice of schools and a higher quality of education than do people from the country. It is also true that, in town you have better job opportunities because labor market is bigger. What is more in a village the public transport is no good and people must commute to work in their own way. In addition there is better healthcare in towns, because more well-educated doctors live in towns and big health centres are there.
Also for many people it is too calm because shopping is harder and shops are not open at a convenient time. In a town you can buy everything you want to and any time you want for instance you can go to all-nighter shop. Furthermore in town you have a chance to meet new people every day and you have more privacy because people are generally more interested in their own problems.
In conclusion, city life is more interesting. I would like to live in a big city (have a lot of money, big house and spend time with my beloved friends because they are wonderful) and I think that may young people would also like to live there too.
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MATKA CHRZESTNA 8)
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