POPRAWA OPOWIADANIA - bardzo proszę o poprawienie mojego opo

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Re: POPRAWA OPOWIADANIA - bardzo proszę o poprawienie mojego opo

Postautor: kfiatek_89 » 22 wrz 2007, 13:20

Witam! Mam napisać opowiadanie zaczynające się od słów: WHEN THE CLASSROOM DOOR OPENDE, EVERYBODE WENT SILENT. (długość 200-250 słów)

udało mi sie coś sklecić ale nie jestem pewna poprawności gramatycznej. ;)


When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. At this day we had first lesson with our new teacher Mr Gula. We heard lots of horrible things about him. We found out that he is very nervous and scream for everything. At his lesson we should be quite and if we could we shouldn’t even breath.

After we had sat to our desks, Mr Gula opened the class register. “Now I’m going to check yours knowledge from the last years” he said. My hart started pounding. “Now everything will start” we thought.

My only thing was please just don’t ask me. Within seconds I heard my name. Teacher asked me a question but my mind went blank. I was so stressed that I could say nothing. “Ok, if you don’t know maybe someone else want to give an answer” Mr Gula said. I looked at him with astonishment, why is he so pleasant. My friends were surprised as much as me.

Teacher looked at as and said “don’t be so stressed I know that you are writing matura exam at this year so our lessons will be really likeable, no tests only practice exams”. We couldn’t believe in that what we heard. We thought he is joking.

We left the classroom really happy but also a little bit confused. Now I know that we shouldn’t believe in everything we heard.


Dzięki:)
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