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For and against essay of having a pet
Pets accompany mankind from the dawn of history. Allegedly, the domestication of animals begun along with Neolithic Revolution (approximately between 10-12 thousand years ago). Some people either hate or love this accompaniment. For sure, there are various disadvantages and advantages of having a pet, which I would try to point out in my essay.
One major advantage of having a pet it is in my opinion that they can replace people and becomes one of our nearest and dearest. For instance, if someone live alone he would find it very enjoyable of having a pet. Furthermore, presence of an animal in home may provide grater feeling of security (especially when this pet is a dog). In addition to this, pets often play a main role in life handicapped and disable people.
Nevertheless, keeping a pet involves a lot of responsibility. Firstly, there are some extra cost which appear along with animals. Pet-holder always need to calculate constant expanses into budget, because his favourite requires food, equipment (cages, collars, aquarium, etc.) and probably veterinary treatment. Apart from this, if you decided buying a pet you will certainly tied yourself up with this animal, because from this moment you will always have to, before going anywhere from town, take into consideration your pet's needing.
Taking everything into account, I realised that my stance in this matter is rather balanced. There are both good and bad sides of keeping a pet in home. In my opinion everything depends on individual character of pet-owner, his particular relishes. I supposed relations between animals and humans are so much diverse and complicated as they are between people.