What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV?

[Bushy]

Topic: What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV?

Nowadays, everyone has a TV receiver and people are spending more and more time in their flats. Should we start to worry about this and our health?

First of all, TV is great source of information for many people. Moreover, young children have great opportunity to gain knowledge from educational auditions and shows. Kids can learn not only from specialistic auditions but from shows dedicated only for them and they are learning through fun and games.

Nevertheless, TV has some drawbacks. Kids are spending more time watching television than being outside their flats on the fresh air. What is more, watching television can be unhealthy not only for kids but also for older users.

To sum up, there is nothing wrong in watching TV, if we know when we should stop. I firmly believe, if you spend more time outside your flat, watching TV will have more advantages than disadvantages.

Chciałbym prosic o sprawdzenie powyż…eszgo wypracowania pod wzgledem gramatycznym jak i stylistycznym.

[ozzzza]

Novadays, everyone has a TV receiver and people are spending more and more time in their houses watching TV. Should we start to worry about this and our health?

First of all, TV is a great source of information for many people. Moreover, young children have a great opportunity to gain knowledge from educational auditions and shows. Kids can learn not only from specialistic auditions but from shows dedicated only for them and they are learning through fun and games.

Nevertheless, TV has some drawbacks. Kids are spending more time watching television than being outside on the fresh air. Also, watching TV can be unhealthy not only for kids but also for older users.

To sum up, there is nothing wrong in watching TV, if we know when we should stop. I firmly believe, if you spend more time outside your flat, watching TV will have more advantages than disadvantages.

[Bushy]

mam kilka uwag ;p

Nowadays nie Novadays

ale domyslam sie ze to przypadkowa pomylka

flats

preferuje flats jako mieszkania w BE

Dziekuje bardzo za poprawe pracy

[HowsAnnie]

ja bym to tak zrobiła(poprawki do poprawki;)):

Kids are spending more time watching television than being outside.

What is more, watching television can be unhealthy not only for kids but also for older users. - myślę ż…e what is more jak najbardziej:) ale also też… moż…e być, tylko ż…e jest mniej "wyszukane";)

I firmly believe, if you spend more time outside, watching TV will have more advantages than disadvantages.

[HowsAnnie]

no i jeśl już… napisałam poprawki do poprawki - to tak - Nowadays:]

[Bushy]

hehe dzieki widze ze wiesz co piszesz

Staralem sie uzywac bardziej zaawansowanych linking words

o czym calokowicie zapomnialem to:

a great

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