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XXXX XXXX
254 Green Street
XXX XXX
000 111 222


Dear Ms Paul…



I read your advertisement in the “Work newspaper” on 04.05.2008r. I would like to apply for the position of in computer programmer.

I am twenty-four years old. I am a student. I am studying Informatic. My hobby is a computer. I like computers. I like sports, motorization, technology. I speak language: Polish, English, German.

I finished a lot of courses and I am prepared to undertaking in your firm work very good. I am responsible man and I assure that I will not disappoint mister.
I to letter enclose all required documents and it waits in matter of qualifying conversation telephone.

I am flexible by whole holidays. My work I start in the finish a June.

Your sincerely

XXXXXX XXXXXX



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XXXX XXXX
254 Green Street
XXX XXX
000 111 222


Dear Ms Paul,

I read your advertisement in “The Work Newspaper” on 04.05.2008 (rozumiem, ż…e “r.” po 2008 to tak z rozpędu ) and I would like to apply for the position of computer programmer.

I am twenty-four years old. I am a student. I study Information Technology. My hobby is computers. I like computers. (niezobowiązująca sugestia: wywalić to drugie zdanie) I like sports, motorization and technology. I speak Polish, English and German.

I have finished a lot of courses and I am prepared to undertake work in your company. I am a responsible man and I assure you I am not going to disappoint you.

I am available during the time of the summer holidays. I will be able to start work at the end of June.

I enclose the required documents and I look forward to your reply.

Your sincerely,
XXXXXX XXXXXX

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