List formalny o pracę...

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List formalny o pracę...

Postautor: kolega123654 » 07 maja 2008, 20:02

Witajcie...

Mam wielką prośbę, mógłby mi ktoś to sprawdzić i jeśli były by jakieś błędy poprawić? Bardzo mi na tym by zależ…ało...

A oto tekst:

Dear Mr. Harris, I read the mister notice which was in Internet and I would like very much to become the worker of your camp and to after children..

I am 23 years old, and am unemployed...He is interested in computers very much and I do not have with them any problem. I be able to web page project, to fold computers, to use corner programmes..When I do not sit on the computer I play this in tennis mostly. I like very much cultivating this sport.

I was the manager in the previous work and coped with this well however there were for small earnings. Juz 3 I had years ago the contact with children because I worked at the kindergarden. I like very much spending the time with them and the contact links with them very easily.

I am at present unemployed now I am accessible the whole year. I can work not only in the holiday...

He depends me on this work now very much I ask for the quick and positive answer.

From respect
Adrian


Serdecznie dziękuję ;) za pomoc ;)
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Re: List formalny o pracę...

Postautor: anglik11 » 08 maja 2008, 6:18

Dear Mr. Harris.

I read mister notice which was in Internet and I would like very much to become worker of your camp and to after children..

I am 23 years old, and am unemployed... I interested computers very much and I do not have with them any problem. I be able to web page project, to fold computers, to use corner programmes... When I do not sit on the computer I play tennis. I like very much cultivating this sport.

I was the manager in the previous work and coped with this well however there were for small earnings. I had years ago the contact with children because I worked at the kindergarden. I like very much spending the time with them and the contact links with them very easily.

I am at present unemployed now I am accessible the whole year. I can work not only in the holiday...

He depends me on this work now very much I ask for the quick and positive answer.

From respect
Adrian nazwisko

Proszę... Ale nie gwarantuję, ż…e w 100% dobrze :)
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Postautor: 4564576 » 10 maja 2008, 15:30

ten list jest cały źle (takoż… i "poprawka") a nie mam zcasu poprawiać, nie radzę tego wysyłać...
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Re: List formalny o pracę...

Postautor: HowsAnnie » 20 maja 2008, 16:32

ten list jest cały źle (takoż… i "poprawka") a nie mam zcasu poprawiać, nie radzę tego wysyłać...


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