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[judin]

Pisalem ten tekst ze 2 dni, poniewaz nie znam prawie w ogole angielskiego, teraz chcialbym kompetentnych osob zapytac czy zachowuje on sens z oryginalem, czyli najproscie mowiac, czy czytajacy to anglik zrozumie??? z gory dziekuje za pomoc.

W nawiasach czasami sa polskie slowka, poniewaz nie mam pojecie czy jest ono w dobrym kontekscie zastosowane, dlatego blagam pomozcie, bo nie mam nikogo kto moglby mi to sprawdzic:(


Stluczke widzial swiadek NIE zwiazany z wypadkiem, jest to osoba bezstronna oraz niezalezna.Ponizej podaje jego dane kontaktowe:

Bump has saw witness no involed with accident. This is person detachment and independence. Below I give her personal date:
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oraz jeszcze dwie osoby, ktore ze mna przyjechaly do pracy i siedzialy w moim samochodzie, sa to osoby:

And two person yet, witch they was coming with me to work. They people was siting down inside in my car. They are:
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Policji nie wezwalem, poniewaz osoba ktora spowodowala stluczke rozplakala sie i mowila zeby tego nie robic,- ze ona za wszystko zaplaci. Dlatego na poczatku mielismy sie dogadac, bez zglaszania 'claimu', lecz ona po uplywie ok. 2h zmienila zdanie, twierdzac, zebym jednak sobie to zglosil do mojej ubezpieczalni. Zatem to byl powod nie wezwania policji, zreszta zdarzenie to bylo na parkingu samochodowym przed miejscem pracy, gdzie policja zapewne by nie przyjechala, z tego co mowili niezalezni swiadkowie.

I didn't the police attend, becouse person witch did bump(stluczka?) started cry and she said my:
„you can't call to the police, I pay you for all!” - and this twaice oance(2 razy?). We had on the begin scoff(dogadac?) abaut this and I had no raport claim. After abaut 2 hour's she changed mind, I didn't know why?. It was cause(powod?) no attended the police. So later we exchange(wymienic?) number cerrtificate insurance. This accident was on the car's parking, when I think so the police no comming, becouse it wasn't very dangers.

Wine za kolizje zdecydowanie ponosi L... U mnie z technicznego punktu widzenia nie bylo to mozliwe, poniewaz w tym momencie zamierzalem wysiasc z wylaczonego pojazdu. Silnik byl wylaczony!

Blame for the accident was Z....For me it was imposiblle, becouse in this moment I've tryed get off from my car. Engine and my car I had off!

Druga strona mogla jak najbardziej uniknac wypadku, poprzez zmniejszenie predkosci oraz (moze to smieszne co powiem) nacisniecie pedalu hamulca. Niestety nie zostal on w ogole uzyty!.

The third party could have avoided(uniknac?) the accident. She was could more slowly driving on the car's parking. Now mayby its gonna be very funny what I will say, but she didn't use brake(hamulec?) button!.

Nie wydarzylo sie to bardzo szybko i nagle. Zdazylem tylko schowac wlasne nogi do srodka auta, poniewaz groziloby mi dlugotrwale kalectwo.

It happend very quickly and suddenly. I kepp place(zdazyc?) only hide(schowac?) my right leg to inside car, becouse I will had (mialbym?) long invalidity.

Moje swiatla byly wylaczone tak jak caly silnik samochodu a drugiej strony nie pamietam.

My lights was switch off, the same like engine car. If going abaut(jesli chodzi o..?) third party I don't remember.

Tak jak wspomnialem byl to parking o duzej ilosci placu.

How I told early it was car's parking abaut very very big place.

Ja nie mialem zadnej predkosci poniewaz jak juz wielokrotnie wspomnialem, silnik mojego pojazdu byl wylaczony a drugiej strony ok 5-10 mil

I said once early I had engine switch off, so I standed in one place, no moves! Third party has drived abaut 5-10 mil.

Na parkingu panowala bardzo ladna pogoda, tzn nie padalo, sucho, bezwietrznie oraz przejrzyscie.

On the parking was very nice weather. Was sunny, dry(sucho?), no rainning, clearly and no windy.

Co do trzezwosci to moge powiedziec tylko za siebie ze bylem jak najbardziej trzezwy, jednak tego samego nie moge stwierdzic u drugiej strony.

I can say abaut myself. I was really sober. If going thirg party I don't know...

Rozmawialem tylko ze sprawczynia kolizji, pytajac jak i dlaczego to zrobilas??? Jak mozna cos takiego wykonac na parkingu, z boku wygladalo to jak na zamierzone dzialanie.

I was conversation only with driver women. I just ask him: „What and how you done this???”
„How can you do on the parking place???”. From one side this watch how special action.

Opis wypadku:

Accident description:

O 8 godz. rano kazdego dnia rozpoczynalem prace. Dnia 15 czerwca w piatek o godz. 7.40 rano przybylem na miejsce parkingowe przed moja praca, zgasilem silnik i ok godz. 7.42 zaczalem prubowac wysiadac. Zdazylem tylko jedna prawa noge wystawic na zewnatrz pojazdu jak zobaczylem jak sprawczyni wypadku nagle nadjezdza zza moich plecow i dziwnie zbliza sie ku mojej kierownicy. Zdazylem szybko schowac nogi, aby uchronic je przed kalectwem, poniewaz wystarczyloby aby sprawczyni uderzyla w moj samochod 30 cm w lewo a przednie drzwi zmiarzdzylyby mi prawa noge. Kobieta ta nawet jeden raz nie nacisnela na pedal hamulca, wrecz przeciwnie po uderzeniu w prawe przednie nadkole odbila sie i nadal noge trzymala na gazie, po czym obroty jej silnika spadly na tyle, ze 'zdusila' auto i silnik zgasl. Nastepnie wysiadlem ze swojego samochodu i podszedlem do niej pytajac: 'cos ty zrobla???' Kobieta ta nawet nie byla w stanie wycofac na bezpieczna odleglosc od mojego uderzonego pojazdu, bo tak sie trzesla i plakala. Jako ze byla to znajoma z pracy, powiedziala mi zebym sie nie martwil bo ona za wszystko zaplaci itd. Po uplywie 2h zmienila zdanie i od tego momentu zaczely sie problemy...
Nastepnie spisujac dane kontaktowe z ubezpieczenia tej kobiety dla bezpieczenstwa zrobilem zdjecie telefonem komurkowym, gdzie widac czesc ubezpieczenia wraz z nazwa firmy. Jesli trzeba moge je zalaczyc do materialu dowodowego. Mam tez informacje, ktora nie jestem w stanie sprawdzic w 100% , ale wiem ze ta kobieta nie posiada prawa jazdy, wiec w tym momencie sprawa jest jasna.

At 8 a.m morning each day I've started work. 27(twenty-seven) June of fridey abaut time 7.40 morning I come on the parking place front my pack house(work area). I've switched off engine and abaut time 7.42 I've began get off from my car. I keep place(zdazyc) only my right leg put on the outside car and I was beholding(zauwazyc?) sudenlly how third party comming from behind(zza) my back and she suspiciosly(podejrzanie?) draw forward(zblizac?) to my steering whel. I keep place(zdazyc?) only hide my right leg. I had luck, becouse 30 cm in left and doors... Third party damaged front weel(it was max. turn left side) and „body-fixing” (nadkole???). This women no pusched one once on the brake(hamulec?) button, nothing! After hit she reflect(odbic?) from my car and still keep leg on gas button and sales(obroty?) engine droped to min. and engine off. Next time I get off from my car and I went do him ask: „What you done??”. She can't back her car from my damaged vechile becouse she all time cry and trembl(trzes się?). She was my friend from job and she told me: „don't worry I pay you everything for all”. After 2 hour's she changed mind and from this moment start problems. Next time I've writed her data insurance and I did 2 photos my mobile phones, when can see a part name of insurance. I will send to you this.
I have got very importand information yet. I'm not sure 100%, only 99%. I can't check this, but this women still don't have licence driver. So for me this is everything lights(jasne?). Please check that.

[Gość]

tu trzeba duż…o poprawić, anglik nie zrozumie, moż…e jutro to zrobię jak mnie naleci ochota do pisania, a dzisiaj moż…e ktoś inny sie pobawi....

[xeo]

Poprawienie tego jest na miarę pisania wszystkiego od nowa, naprawdę będzie się musiało komuś niesamowicie chcieć. Proponuję Ci podzielić to sprawozdanie z wypadku na małe kawałki (po 1 do 3 zdań) i wklejać stopniowo na forum, w taki sposób na pewno szybciej uzyskasz przynajmniej częściową pomoc, bo każ…dy na jakiś mały kawałek szybciej rzuci okiem i poprawi niż… na takiego tasiemca, potem sobie to wszystko poskładasz w jedną całość.

[judin]

Ojej:((((( Blagam kogos naprawde o pomoc, odwdziecze sie jakos ale naprawde nie mam sie do kogos zwrocic, prosze..blagam...

[judin]

ok to w takim razie prosze o sprawdzenie TYLKO tego:

O 8 godz. rano kazdego dnia rozpoczynalem prace. Dnia 15 czerwca w piatek o godz. 7.40 rano przybylem na miejsce parkingowe przed moja praca, zgasilem silnik i ok godz. 7.42 zaczalem prubowac wysiadac. Zdazylem tylko jedna prawa noge wystawic na zewnatrz pojazdu jak zobaczylem jak sprawczyni wypadku nagle nadjezdza zza moich plecow i dziwnie zbliza sie ku mojej kierownicy. Zdazylem szybko schowac nogi, aby uchronic je przed kalectwem, poniewaz wystarczyloby aby sprawczyni uderzyla w moj samochod 30 cm w lewo a przednie drzwi zmiarzdzylyby mi prawa noge. Kobieta ta nawet jeden raz nie nacisnela na pedal hamulca, wrecz przeciwnie po uderzeniu w prawe przednie nadkole odbila sie i nadal noge trzymala na gazie, po czym obroty jej silnika spadly na tyle, ze 'zdusila' auto i silnik zgasl. Nastepnie wysiadlem ze swojego samochodu i podszedlem do niej pytajac: 'cos ty zrobla???' Kobieta ta nawet nie byla w stanie wycofac na bezpieczna odleglosc od mojego uderzonego pojazdu, bo tak sie trzesla i plakala. Jako ze byla to znajoma z pracy, powiedziala mi zebym sie nie martwil bo ona za wszystko zaplaci itd. Po uplywie 2h zmienila zdanie i od tego momentu zaczely sie problemy...
Nastepnie spisujac dane kontaktowe z ubezpieczenia tej kobiety dla bezpieczenstwa zrobilem zdjecie telefonem komurkowym, gdzie widac czesc ubezpieczenia wraz z nazwa firmy. Jesli trzeba moge je zalaczyc do materialu dowodowego. Mam tez informacje, ktora nie jestem w stanie sprawdzic w 100% , ale wiem ze ta kobieta nie posiada prawa jazdy, wiec w tym momencie sprawa jest jasna.

At 8 a.m morning each day I've started work. 27(twenty-seven) June of fridey abaut time 7.40 morning I come on the parking place front my pack house(work area). I've switched off engine and abaut time 7.42 I've began get off from my car. I keep place(zdazyc) only my right leg put on the outside car and I was beholding(zauwazyc?) sudenlly how third party comming from behind(zza) my back and she suspiciosly(podejrzanie?) draw forward(zblizac?) to my steering whel. I keep place(zdazyc?) only hide my right leg. I had luck, becouse 30 cm in left and doors... Third party damaged front weel(it was max. turn left side) and „body-fixing” (nadkole???). This women no pusched one once on the brake(hamulec?) button, nothing! After hit she reflect(odbic?) from my car and still keep leg on gas button and sales(obroty?) engine droped to min. and engine off. Next time I get off from my car and I went do him ask: „What you done??”. She can't back her car from my damaged vechile becouse she all time cry and trembl(trzes się?). She was my friend from job and she told me: „don't worry I pay you everything for all”. After 2 hour's she changed mind and from this moment start problems. Next time I've writed her data insurance and I did 2 photos my mobile phones, when can see a part name of insurance. I will send to you this.
I have got very importand information yet. I'm not sure 100%, only 99%. I can't check this, but this women still don't have licence driver. So for me this is everything lights(jasne?). Please check that.

[Gość]

***proszę czekać- poniweaż… tj dla Pana bardzo waż…ne tłumaczę tą część na, kt. Panu bardzo zależ…y-wieczorem będzie gotowe- małgorzata

[Gość]

Each day at 8 a.m in the morning I started my work. On Friday June, the 27 at about 7.40 in the morning I came on the parking place situated in front of my work place, I switched off the engine and at about 7.42 I began to get off my car. I only managed to put my right leg outside my car when I noticed that a perpetrator of the accident suddenly was approaching from behind my back and was coming towards my steering wheel strangely. I only managed to hide my legs quickly to protect them before disability because if only the perpetrator had hit my car 30 cm left, the front door would have crushed my right leg. The woman didn’t press the brake even once, on the contrary she bounced after having hit the right front body-fixing frame and was still holding her leg on the gas pedal, whereby the rotation of her engine decreased to such an extent that she ‘supressed’ her car and the engine was switched off. Next I got off my car and came to her asking “What have you done?” The woman wasn’t even able to draw back on the safety distance from my hit car as she was trembling and weeping. As it was an acquanitance from my work she told me not to worry as she was going to pay for everything etc. After 24 h she changed her mind and the problems started from that very moment...
Consequently recording her contact data from her insurance I took a photo by my mobile phone for safety in which it’s visible her part of the insurance and that name of the enterprise company. If it’s necessary I may enclose it to my evidence. I’m also in the possession of the information which I’m not able to check in 100% but I know that woman doesn’t have a driving licence so in that situation the matter is clear.


**** dobrze, ż…e Pan ż…yje- widocznie tak miało być!!!!**** baba za kierownica bez prawa jazdy niezłe!!!

[Gość]

Each day at 8 a.m in the morning I started my work. On Friday June, the 27 at about 7.40 in the morning I came on the parking place situated in front of my work place, I switched off the engine and at about 7.42 I began to get off my car. I only managed to put my right leg outside my car when I noticed that a perpetrator of the accident suddenly was approaching from behind my back and was coming towards my steering wheel strangely. I only managed to hide my legs quickly to protect them before disability because if only the perpetrator had hit my car 30 cm left, the front door would have crushed my right leg. The woman didn’t press the brake even once, on the contrary she bounced after having hit the right front body-fixing frame and was still holding her leg on the gas pedal, whereby the rotation of her engine decreased to such an extent that she ‘supressed’ her car and the engine was switched off. Next I got off my car and came to her asking “What have you done?” The woman wasn’t even able to draw back on the safety distance from my hit car as she was trembling and weeping. As it was an acquanitance from my work she told me not to worry as she was going to pay for everything etc. After 24 h she changed her mind and the problems started from that very moment...
Consequently recording her contact data from her insurance I took a photo by my mobile phone for safety in which it’s visible her part of the insurance and that name of the enterprise company. If it’s necessary I may enclose it to my evidence. I’m also in the possession of the information which I’m not able to check in 100% but I know that woman doesn’t have a driving licence so in that situation the matter is clear.
*** małgorzata***

[Adz@r]

Dziękuje za poprawne napisanie wypracowania. Pozdrawiam Piotr W.

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