Poprawienie błedów w zadaniu

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Poprawienie błedów w zadaniu

Postautor: Gość » 17 gru 2009, 3:09

Witam bardzo proszę o szybką korekte błedów,które znajdują się w mojej
Rozprawce.


The most part of people in the world doing activities in themselves free time.Someone like safely sports,others prefer dangerous sports.I jike basketball and skiing.Those sports are most interesting for me so I will present some advatages and disadvantages of this kid of sports.
Basketball is a most popular sports in USA.The lots of young people play in this sports on street and in sportscentre.Basketball is very cheaper sports.What you need is only bal,shoes and T-shirt.Basketball is special kind of sport where you must be fit.You needn't be very high to play basketball.This sports is for everyone but you must remember that basketball is fast game and very tired sports.
Now,it's time for dangerous sports,which is rock-climbing.This sports is more expensive than bsketball and isn't as popular as basketball.How i wrot rock-climbing is very expensive becuse equipment costs a lot of money.To doing this sports you need roope,boots and helmet.It's also very dangerous sports so you must be courageous.This kind of sports is very relaxing and enjoyable,because when you climb on the top,you'll see how big thing you have done.Also is very dificulty sports to learn są you must be patient.
I hope that advantages and disadvantages which I wrote will be helpfull to choose sports,which you will be doing in your free time.
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Re: Poprawienie błedów w zadaniu

Postautor: eveline01 » 26 gru 2009, 8:22

Mówisz masz :)

The most important part for people in the world is doing activities in their free time. Someone likes safe sports, others prefer dangerous sports. I like basketball and skiing. Those sports are the most interesting for me so I will present some advatages and disadvantages of these kind of sports.
Basketball is the most popular sport in the USA. Lots of young people play these sports on the street and in the sportscentre. Basketball is a very cheap sport. What you need is only a ball, a pair of shoes and a T-shirt. Basketball is a special kind of sport where you must be fit. You don't need to be very tall to play basketball. This sport is for everyone but you must remember that basketball is a fast game and a very tiring sport.
Now, it's time for dangerous sport which is rock-climbing. This sport is more expensive than basketball and isn't as popular as basketball. Rock-climbing is very expensive because equipment costs a lot of money. To do this sport, you need rope, boots and a helmet. It's also very dangerous so you must be courageous. This kind of sport is very relaxing and enjoyable because when you climb the top, you see what a big thing you have done. Also it is a very difficult sport to learn so you must be patient.
I hope that the advantages and disadvantages which I wrote will be helpful to choose sports you will do in your free time.
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Re: Poprawienie błedów w zadaniu

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