proszę o sprawdzenie.

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proszę o sprawdzenie.

Postautor: naatttaaa » 10 kwie 2010, 22:17

Napisałam to sama , ale nie wiem czy dobrze . Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie ewentualnych błędów. Jest to opis mojego wymarzonego domu.

The house of my dreams is it cottage. It is of yellow colour.
The roof has the colour red . The my dream house has one floor , garage , and big garden. There is a balcon on the floor.
There are a beautiful flowers in the garden . The house of my dreams has six rooms. There are two bedrooms , bathroom . kitchen , living room and dinning room in my dream house. There are sitting room , bathroom and dining room on the ground floor. The dinning room is on the right. There are a los of chairs , cupboards in the dining room. In the Middle od the dinning room is a large table. The walls are of the colour blue.
Next to dining room is bathroom. The bathroom is smaller than dining room . There is a white sink , shower, green shower curtains , and white bath.
The walls are of the white colour. The sitting romm is the biggest in my house . There are a lots of furniture. There is a red sofa . There are a four armchairs . There is a table in the middle of the living room. There is a large Tv. The walls are of the orange colour.
There are a kitchen , and two bedrooms the first floor. On the left is kichen . There is a cooker , a fridge and a sink . In the middle of the kitchen there is a big wooden table. MY bedroom is on the right. My bedroom is huge. It has 19 square metres . There are two windows. The walls in my bedroom are pink . There is a bed , wardrobe , two armchairs , TV in my bedroom. There is a desk with computer stand on the left side of the window. In the middle there is a purple carpet .
The last bedroom is the smallest. There is small bed and black desk . There is orqange Lamp on the desk. There is Chest of drawers.
That's my dream house !
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Re: proszę o sprawdzenie.

Postautor: BirkeLaFolle » 11 kwie 2010, 18:34

The house of my dreams is a cottage. It is of yellow colour.
The roof has a red colour . My dream house has one floor , a garage , and a big garden. There is a balcony on the first floor.
There are beautiful flowers in the garden . The house of my dreams has six rooms. There are two bedrooms , a bathroom . a kitchen , a living room and a dining room in my dream house. There is a sitting room , a bathroom and a dining room on the ground floor. The dining room is on the right. There are a lot of chairs , cupboards in the dining room. In the middle of the dining room there is a large table. The walls are of blue colour.
Next to the dining room there is a bathroom. The bathroom is smaller than the dining room . There is a white sink , a shower, green shower curtains , and a white bath.
The walls are of white colour. The sitting room is the biggest one in my house . There are lots of furniture. There is a red sofa . There are four armchairs . There is a table in the middle of the living room. There is a large Tv. The walls are of orange colour.
There is a kitchen , and two bedrooms on the first floor. On the left there is the kichen . There is a cooker , a fridge and a sink . In the middle of the kitchen there is a big wooden table. MY bedroom is on the right. My bedroom is huge. It has 19 square metres . There are two windows. The walls in my bedroom are pink . There is a bed , a wardrobe , two armchairs , TV in my bedroom. There is a desk with a computer standing on the left side of the window. In the middle there is a purple carpet .
The last bedroom is the smallest one. There is a small bed and a black desk . There is an orange Lamp on the desk. There is a Chest of drawers.
That's my dream house !
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Re: proszę o sprawdzenie.

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