proszę o sprawdzenie krótkiego opowiadania

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proszę o sprawdzenie krótkiego opowiadania

Postautor: madzik000 » 23 lis 2010, 23:49

Last summer my friend and I decided to go for a walk to forest. It was sunny, hot, wonderful day and we did not want to waste this day.

We were walking, wondering green forest and listening a birdsong. We thought that nothing could (zepsuć) this atmosphere. We were also talking and laughing all time. Suddenly, we felt that we went down. We got stuck in trap for animals. At first we did not know what there were happening. Then I felt terrible pain. It was my leg. I thought that it was broken. With Jake was all good so I was not worry about him. We decided to phone for help but there were not (zasięgu). We could not do anything. The hole was so deep so we were not able to get out. There were later and later. We lost our hope that we could go out this evening. Suddenly we heard dog barking. It approached and barked two times. Then it ran back. I could not stand up. The pain was terrible. After two minutes we noticed the boy. We were so happy. He helped us to go out and (zaprowadził) me to hospital. We were grateful him and his dog.

Everything ended luckily. We had unpleasant adventure but despite it, the day was really nice.
madzik000
 




Re: proszę o sprawdzenie krótkiego opowiadania

Postautor: vlord » 07 cze 2022, 3:16

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