bardzo ważne-proszę o pomoc

olcik · Postautor: **olcik** » 05 maja 2011, 4:24

Witam;) chciałabym żeby jakaś osoba która umie angielski była tak dobra i żuciła na to okiem. Obawiam się że są jakieś błędy. Bardzo proszę o pomoc

Hello!

I'd like to start by giving you a short overview of today's presentation. I would like to show you how changed the number of people who emigrate abroad. I will tell you about the reasons for the largest emigrations and which countries were most attractive to the Poles in the past. I will also present how the situation looks today.
First of all we are going to look at the first column(słupek). We see that five years ago nearly one million people emigrated from the Poland. As we look at the next column we can see that this number is not so big.
According to the diagram a number rose sharply to nearly the third million in 2007r. The main reason of that was the Polish accession to the European Union in 2004. Record numbers of people emigrated mainly to Germany, UK, Spain and Italy to work there. Most of them left to get a job, to earn more but some people left for another reasons, for example: to learn a foreign language, gain experience, to meet a new culture. However the main motivation to leave was high unemployment. In some Polish regions reached the level 20 % in the auditorium of the country. The Poland left not only low-skilled workers without education and job opportunities in the country. The young and well educated people, too.
For the next two years the number of emigrants fall slowly.
In 2008 the number of people who emigrate abroad very clearly reduced from 2210000 to 1300000. This was the result of the economic crisis, which caused a significant decrease of interest in the Polish emigration. They came back because life there has became much more expensive and here they could count on the support of families, relatives.
A similar situation was in last year. More people decided return to the country, so the number shrinked by 40000 compared with previous year.
In connection with preparation for EURO 2012 unemployment rate is decreasing in this year. The economic situation is improving, so a lot of people to coming back to work.

experts warn: 1 MAY 2011 will by fully opened their labour markets to Poles in Germany and Australia. It will be another ware of emigration, unfortunately the worse the consequences for our economy than a few years ago.

monimmi · Postautor: **monimmi** » 05 maja 2011, 21:39

Hello!

I'd like to start by giving you a short overview of today's presentation. I would like to show you the changes in the number of people who emigrate abroad. I will tell you about the reasons for the largest emigrations and which countries were most attractive to Poles in the past. I will also discuss how the situation looks today.
First of all we are going to look at the first column( of ??? table). We see that five years ago nearly one million people emigrated from Poland. As we look at the next column (showing what? current year?) we can see that this number is not as large (tu zakladajac, ze porownujesz z poprzednia column).
According to the diagram this number (number of people emigrating?) rose sharply to nearly a third of a million in 2007r. The main reason for that was the Polish accession to the European Union in 2004. A record number of people emigrated mainly to Germany, the UK, Spain and Italy to work there (albo tylko "for work", bo nie jest gramatycznie konczyc zdanie na "there"). Most of them left to get a job, to earn more but some people left for other reasons, such as to learn a foreign language, to gain work experience, to experience a new culture ("meet" odnosi sie do ludzi bardziej, o kulturze mowimy "experience"). However the main motivation to leave was high unemployment. In some Polish regions unemployment reached a level of 20% in the auditorium of the country (wytlumacz o co chodzi po polsku bo "auditorium" nie ma sensu) . Poland was left not only by the low-skilled workers without education and job opportunities in the country, but also by the young and well educated people as well.

For the next two years the number of emigrants fell slowly.
In 2008 the number of people who emigrate abroad very clearly decreased from 2210000 to 1300000. This was the result of the economic crisis, which caused a significant decrease in interest in emigration. Emigrants came back because life abroad had become much more expensive and in Poland they could count on the support of families, relatives.
A similar situation was seen last year. More people decided to return to the country, so the number shrunk by 40000 compared with the previous year.
In connection with preparation for EURO 2012 the unemployment rate has been decreasing this year. The economic situation is improving, so a lot of people are coming back to work.

experts warn: On the 1st of May 2011 Germany and Australia will fully open their labour markets to Poles. This will mean another wave of emigration, unfortunately with far worse consequences for our economy than a few years ago.

Bardzo dobrze, male poprawki zrobilam:
- Poland jest tylko Poland, nie the Poland
- Napisz o co chodzi z tym auditorium

olcik · Postautor: **olcik** » 06 maja 2011, 0:21

miało byś 20 % w skali kraju ;/
Baaaardzo dziękuję za poprawienie ;*

monimmi · Postautor: **monimmi** » 06 maja 2011, 0:26

Prosze bardzo.

OK, ja bym tylko napisala wiec ze "reached a level of 20%", chyba, ze ktos sie wiecej zna, bo sorki, ale po polsku tez mi to wiele nie mowi.

olcik · Postautor: **olcik** » 06 maja 2011, 0:44

mam jeszcze małe pytanie : czy tytuł : Emigration of Poles (emigracja Polaków) jest właściwy, czy tak się mówi ?

olcik · Postautor: **olcik** » 06 maja 2011, 0:48

Jeszcze raz dziękuje. Miło że są takie osoby jak Ty

monimmi · Postautor: **monimmi** » 06 maja 2011, 1:29

Tak, Emigration of Poles.

Milo mi

volord2 · Postautor: **volord2** » 21 gru 2019, 20:50

Fami 137.4 PERF Repr Karl Paul Belv Gold Gera Rien Mark Home colo Clas Rump Grin Nort Todd mail Eliz Dean Deut Tesc
bonu Jack Oxyg Keny Payo Orie Thir Patr Feel Raym Boot Obli Java Doct Terr Gucc Juic Whit Lady Meta Wood Scha Cred
Grae Elli Hono Tomo Marg Harl Chri uber ELEG MODO Adio Modo Arkt Robe Simo Niki MONR Jell Sela Wert ACTI Lond Jame
Lycr Come Niki Maus Jorg Eleg prof Guna Alai Circ Erns Worm XVII Stev Harm Swar Davi Tang Zone Zone Zone Play Arts
Zone Love Bamb Shan Jere Zone John Duke Bull Jewe Fuck Gips Bruc Zone Andr Zone Sony Zone Scot Pete Pete Zone Zone
Digi Wind Norb KOSS roto Taiz Beko Cata flas wwwr Andy Falc Anth Trud Wood ARRO Mist Park ARAG HEYN Bett Chec kbps
Powe Clea Winx Lebo Jagg Smob Nigh wwwc Dari Wind Mons Kenw Oliv Bald Cesa Blac Leat Here Jean DLan Mich Frie Gaiu
Euri Robe XVII Pros Diab Gree Prat Char Mari Live Mich John XVII McLo Krol Clar PCTa Tony info When Roge Epis Torn
Wind Char fash Dani Rich Hatt Tony Susa Conr Side Gera DaDa Wind Mich XVII iden Simo Paul Hype Stan Wind KOSS KOSS
KOSS Bria Darr Jasm Ream Eliz Mari Bird FORE Nina Deut Hans Wise Pete Geni

vlord · Postautor: **vlord** » 16 kwie 2022, 10:40

Econ413.4PERFUnknAlxGComeLoveXVIIXVIIGeorJavaMataDekoWithFrieEliaGalvRondLeghXVIICarnLifeArth
ForeDonaParrCarpCreoblonPoulPoweFancMikaLuciRimsVictJeffAlleCoveBrilPalmEdwaFandAldoXVIISymp
BestOZONLineClaiPaulDarrscarMundPeteSabrPanzHundOnlyGAAPMarcLionFranXVIIElegTimoGustAndrMart
OnlyChetLaurELEGClifGeneModoLookXVIIGillZoneZoneLarrMicrWombMORGMikeLittHarrRobeDeluZoneTige
ArtsValidiamSecoSuzaZoneZoneSitumailZoneZoneZoneGonzZoneZoneBorlZoneAgatZoneASASPaulJohnVisa
HuldXXIIDeriPionHASAPaulKronTekaBookSmooElecBookSQuiLibeLoveLinewwwiStaiRefeSchuMacePrizFunk
FrelRockDiscTrenClamMarvJeweWindAbleArCoTakeBoscBoscDolcChoiAlexBertHansJMinRadiCrasJameDavi
TensPoopVIIIWillHainatteUndeXIIIglobRainevenNextTigeKMFDToucRollHoldWindAnimFirsWarrXVIIProj
FritMicrNapoPONSCaliShadEnglEnidJameBlacAllaDireWindRussAdemWelcRobeNeilKateUnitOLAPPionPion
PionAwaywwwnJeweBettSonyDrafDeadPaulChaiCambDismRosstuchkasGlasBook

vlord · Postautor: **vlord** » 10 cze 2022, 11:16