proszę o sprawdzenie - rozprawka

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Re: proszę o sprawdzenie - rozprawka

Postautor: Matka Chrzestna » 01 lis 2006, 20:15

Witam
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w mojej rozprawce
na temat zalet i wad robienia zakupów w hipermarketach

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Nowadays, wandering around the hypermarkets is becoming a way of spending free time. Instead of, going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to supermarkets. Although, doing shopping in these places has a lot of advantages there are also disadvantages.

Doubtlessly in hypermarkets you can find everything you want – clothes, food, household equipment, and other goods. So, when you are very busy, visiting this kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if you like reading labels and considering which product is more worth buying you can do it much easier in hypermarkets. Besides, people have more opportunity to find cheap original things because there are a lot of reductions and sales.

On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can buy things, which you do not need and do not want to but you buy them under the influence of the moment. Another problem is the noise. Often, Hypermarkets are crowded and loud places. As a result, when people have to queue for a long tome or look for a parking space it makes them very stressed and annoyed, Furthermore, in small shops you can talk to a shop assistant, he may give you advice about specific products and share his experience with you. In supermarkets you do not have this possibility.

In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets has many pros and cons. It seems that the decision what that means to different people depends on personal point of view and lifestyle. The choice of whether you do your shopping in hypermarkets always remains with you

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Re: proszę o sprawdzenie - rozprawka

Postautor: Visitor » 11 lis 2006, 16:37

w sumie ja dobrze tancze:P:P:P:P:P:P
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Re: proszę o sprawdzenie - rozprawka

Postautor: illi » 11 lis 2006, 21:17

Nowadays, wandering around hypermarkets becomes a way of spending free time. Instead of going to a park, the cinema or the theatre, families go to supermarkets. Although shopping in these places has a lot of advantages, there are also disadvantages of this.
Doubtlessly, you can find everything you want in hypermarkets – clothes, food, household equipment, and other goods. So, when you are very busy, visiting this kind of shops may save your precious time. In addition, if you like reading labels and considering which product is more worth buying you can do it much easier in hypermarkets. Besides, people have more opportunities to find cheap original products because there are a lot of discounts and sales.
On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can buy things which you do not need and do not want but you buy them on the spur of the moment. Another problem is the noise. Frequently, hypermarkets are crowded loud places. As a result, when people have to queue for a long time or to look for a parking place it makes them very stressed and annoyed. Furthermore, in small shops you can talk to the shop assistant. He or she may give you advice about specific products and share their experience with you. In supermarkets you do not have this possibility.
In conclusion, shopping in hypermarkets has many pros and cons. It seems that an opinion about this depends on the personal point of view and the lifestyle of different people. Whether or not you do your shopping in hypermarkets is always up to you.

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