My hobby is the paintball. - sprawdzenie

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My hobby is the paintball. - sprawdzenie

Postautor: jacekgrad » 28 paź 2010, 21:01

Proszę o poprawienie błędów.


My hobby is Paintball.

I want to tell you about my hobby which is the paintball.
I play this sport for five years.
Since 2008, I and my friends belong to amateur team.
Every week ,We train nearby forest.
We have there special territory with trenches, bunkers and hide-outs.
The game is that someone of team must capture the flag and run to the starting point.
In this time he can’t to be shot.
Professional player must to have special equipment : mask, suit, shoes and naturally compressed air gun.
In this sport everyone must use only balls with paint.
Other ammunition is forbidden.
The good player must be quick, deft and careful.
Every year, We take part in communal tournament.
Last time We took 1st place and were rewarded with new paintball equipment.

Chciałbym jeszcze dopisać:

Dlatego zachęcam wszystkich do uprawiania tego sportu, gdyż… moż…na doznać niezapomnianych emocji.


Z góry dzięki.
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Re: My hobby is the paintball. - sprawdzenie

Postautor: Gość » 29 paź 2010, 16:05

My hobby,

Paintball is my hobby and I have been playing it for 5 years.
Since 2008, my friends and I, belong to amateur team.
We train in a nearby forest every week
We have special painball field, with trenches, bunkers and hide-outs.
The object of the game is, that a player of a team, must capture opponent flag and run to the starting point.
At that time he can’t to be shot.
Professional player must to have special equipment : mask, suit, shoes and compressed air gun.
In Paintball, balls with paint are the only ammunition that is allowed.
The good player must be quick, clever and careful.
Every year, we take part in a tournament.
Last time we took 1st place and were rewarded with new paintball equipment.
I would encourage everyone to participate, it is a unbelievable thrill.
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Re: My hobby is the paintball. - sprawdzenie

Postautor: Gość » 29 paź 2010, 16:11

Nie zauwarzyłem
Professional player must to have special equipment popraw na
Professional player must have a special equipment.
Gość
 

Re: My hobby is the paintball. - sprawdzenie

Postautor: kocan » 29 paź 2010, 16:49

Ja bym jeszcze poprawił:

Since 2008, my friends and I have belonged to an amateur team.
a special paintball field
an opponent`s flag
At that time he can’t be shot.
a mask, a suit
the balls with paint
A good player
moż…e lepiej: I would like to encourage everyone to try this game, as it gives you unbelievable thrill.

Ale to tak według mnie...
Pozdrawiam
kocan
 

Re: My hobby is the paintball. - sprawdzenie

Postautor: kocan » 29 paź 2010, 18:12

Jeszcze coś... Poprawnie chyba będzie:
Professional player must have special equipment.
kocan
 



Re: My hobby is the paintball. - sprawdzenie

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