Witam,
Chciałbym prosić o sprawdzenie wypracowania (narrativ story):
A Disastrous Evening
It was beautiful, summer afternoon. I, my parents and my brother Kevin packed ours baggage and prepared to travelled to the United States by plane. We would like toured New York City, Washington, Las Vegas, Los Angeles, San Francisco and Chicago. It was our first voyage to the USA. We look forward this travel. Everybody was very happy and excited.
When we finished pack the baggage, we take the taxi and drive to the airport. The airport was enormous and loud. My father, after a long time spent in a waiting line, bought three tickets. When we had the tickets, we went to the waiting-room and wait for our flight. About five o’clock we came in to the plane of North American Airlines, Boeing MD-11. We takes business class, which was more comfortable, but much expensive than touristy class. Interior of the plane was superb. The seats was extremely soft and comfortable.
‘Please fasten your seat belt!’ said stewardess and we started. In the beginning the plane shook, but later it stopped. I saw delightful view by the window – blue rivers and ponds, miniature meadows and forests… Suddenly, I heard horrible noise – it was thunder. The plane shook. Everybody began be nervous, but stewardesses quieten. The thunder and shock recurred. It was terrific! We feared. Stewardess commanded fasten seat belt and keeping quiet. After next thunder the lights in plain winked. People began to panic. The weather was bad and we fly in centre of huge storm. At last, we landed emergency in Madrid.
It was a disastrous evening in the plane and I’ll never forgot the time. All in all we all got out of this adventure without any harm.