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Bob Johnson was a famous businessman and traveler. He had earned his first money investing on The Stock Exchange. He was so rich that he could fly all over the world in his well equipped Boeing 707, and sail his big yachts on every sea and ocean. Each year for holidays he took his family to visit different countries and their capital cities.
But sometimes everything goes wrong. Unexpectedly Bob’s stock started losing their value very fast, because journalists claimed that directors of Johnson’s company had taken bribes. He also had many unpaid credits and was deep in debt. His life was very expensive and luxurious and for that reason expenses were not controlled. Now he was intimidating and blackmailing that his wife or children would be kidnapped if he didn’t returned the borrowed money.
Nevertheless Bob didn’t stop thinking about future journeys. He had been planning an expedition into the dangerous mountains of Asia for two years. Now he would like to realize his dreams. The journey had to last one month. Bob promised his family that he would send messages and make phone calls every day. But after few days he hadn’t given any signs of life. His wife was distraught. She informed the mountain rescue teams but they couldn’t find Bob’s body.
Did something or someone kill Bob? Maybe he ran away from his problems and nowadays he lives somewhere else as a new person with a new identity. Nobody would ever learn the truth.
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