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prosze o sprawdzenie. Pilne:-(

Postautor: Ania66666 » 23 kwie 2008, 7:40

Temat: AIDS victims should be isolated from the rest of socjety.

The situation of AIDS victims is one of the biggest problems concerning many people oll oper the world.
There are two groups of AIDS victims: people who became infected because of their negligence and people who got AIDS in spite of awaredness of risk.
Existing among people fearbefore to get infected and desire to escape before ill of AIDS.
In our society consciousnessn that to spend time with us ill of AIDS to evoke panic.
To result from small awareness society to concern AIDS.
Opinions are divided but most people usually try to avoid any contacts with such victims.
In my opinion they shouldn’t be isolated fro the rest of society.
Personally I think that in accident AIDS the most important is prevention from isolated.
There people are ill, but still they are valuable member society and isolated maybe only all the people a change for the worse.
As well may to begin isolated people to have flu, cancer or jaundice.
In conclude It would be inhuman to separate them from other people. It would rather make their life worse
Ania66666
 


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Postautor: Simonnnn » 23 kwie 2008, 16:02

No wiec mowiac szczerze kilka rzeczy nie mialo zupelnie sensu. naskrobalem ci kilka zdan ktore moga ci sie przydac. pisalem to dosyc szybko i nie mialem czasu na jakies wieksze wypracowanko.
studiuje na uniwersytecie w anglii i czego sie tu nauczylem to to zeby pisac prosto. na tym polega jezyk ang. nie komplikuj tego co chcesz napisac. pozdrawiam i zycze sukcesow w nauce ang.
PS. czytaj artykuly albo ksiazki po ang. na poczatku bedzie trudno ale pozniej bedziesz piasala jak po polsku.
napisz jak poszlo miszczak1983@o2.pl


The situation of present AIDS illness has become major problem in many societies.
This large problem concerns people from all over the world.
There are two groups of AIDS victims:
1) People who became infected through their negligence.
2) People who have got AIDS in spite of awareness of risk.
Some people are scared of being infected so in results they do anything to escape from the AIDS. They avoid “AIDS positives” as much as they can. In some examples they simple want them to be isolated from the rest of people!
In our society awareness of this subject is still taboo topic.
Lack of advertisements and educational information have made AIDS problem most scary thing on the earth. However, we can copy with this problem as long as we protect ourselves form blood and sexual contacts.
In the end I would never say that these people have to be isolated. As I have mentioned already, uneducated people make this problem bigger than it really is. The only one solution for this problem is to make it more obvious so that people will gain appropriate knowledge of its subject.

the end :)
Simonnnn
 



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