Review

bombel1 · Postautor: **bombel1** » 06 gru 2008, 14:38

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"Lord Of The Rings: The Return of the King", directed by Peter Jackson, is a third and final part of trilogy. It is a fantasy film, based on J.R.R Tolkien books. The film is set in Middle-earth and tells the storey of friends, who must save the world. A leading actors are Elijah Wood(Frodo) and Vigo Morgenstern(Aragorn).
The plot focuses on battle between good and evil. Leader of evil army Sauron watns to destroy people's civilization and gain powerful ring. The storey begins, when Frodo with his friend Sam and odd creature Gollum are going to capital of evil's kingdom. At the same time part of evil army are destroyed in Helm's Deep and Isengard, but next are reaching to latest stronghold of free people - Minas Tirith.
The movie is brilliantly directed. The script is very involving and gripping so even those, who are not interrested in a fantasy movies will not be bored watched it. Scenery is most beautiful and it is ideal for this kind of film. In addition creatures, which are presented in this film are very realistic. Moreover the cast is exellent and every actor play with commitment. It contain a lot of turns of action and moving end.
"Lord Of The Rings: The Return of the King" is interesting and essentially timeless film. I would recommend it because this film...(tutaj chciałbym napiać że: film ten postada wszystko co podoba się/ciekawi widza: dużo akcji, wielkie bitwy i epicka fabułe)...Ii is well worth going to see.

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Biggie82 · Postautor: **Biggie82** » 07 gru 2008, 19:14

"The Lord Of The Rings: The Return of the King", directed by Peter Jackson, is the third and final part of the trilogy. It is a fantasy film, based on J.R.R Tolkien books. The film is set in Middle-earth and tells the story of friends, who must save the world. The leading actors are Elijah Wood(Frodo) and Vigo Morgenstern(Aragorn).
The plot focuses on a battle between good and evil. Leader of the evil army - Sauron - watns to destroy human civilization and gain a powerful ring. The story begins, when Frodo with his friend Sam and an odd creature Gollum are going to the capital of the evil kingdom. At the same time a part of the evil army is destroyed at the Helm's Deep and Isengard. The victorious survivirs are then heading to the latest stronghold of the free peoples - Minas Tirith.
The movie is brilliantly directed. The script is very involving and gripping, so even those, who are not interrested in fantasy movies, will not be bored watching it. Scenery is awesome and it is ideal for this kind of a film. In addition, the creatures which are present in the film are very realistic. Moreover, the cast is exellent and every actor plays with visible commitment. It contains a lot of turns of action and a moving ending.
"The Lord Of The Rings: The Return of the King" is an interesting and essentially timeless movie. I would recommend it because this film contains everything what keeps the audience on the edge of the seat: it's packed with action, monumental battles and a truly epic plot. It is really worth watching.

arturolczykowski · Postautor: **arturolczykowski** » 08 gru 2008, 11:33

...watns to destroy human civilization

not only human I think....

Biggie82 · Postautor: **Biggie82** » 09 gru 2008, 20:12

Primo, że kolega chciał żeby mu poprawić wypracowanie, więc to zrobiłem - pod katem merytorycznym, a nie treści. Zamieniłem wiec people na human.
"Władce" czytałem i oglądałem, po kilka razy wręcz, i jakoś nie widzę nic złego w stwierdzeniu "human civ". Owszem, chodzi o ludzi+elfy+krasnoludy+hobbici+entowie itd, ale jeśli się spojrzy z perspektywy ze 'human=istota myslaca' to czemu nie...?
Chyba ze ktos ma ciekawsze propozycje.