Sprawdzenie i poprawienie listu do przyjaciela

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Sprawdzenie i poprawienie listu do przyjaciela

Postautor: Gość » 18 gru 2008, 13:15

Witam serdecznie. Ostatnio na j. angielskim dostaliśmy do napisania email do starego znajomego, którego dawno nie widzieliśmy. Nie jestem typep "pasoż…yta", więc spróbowałama go napisać, jednak moja gramatyka jest na bardzo niskim poziomie, gdyż… w szkołach do których uczęszczałam nigdy nikt nie kładł najmniejszego nacisku na jej naukę. Niż…ej zamieszczam napisaną własnoręcznie pracę i bardzo proszę "odobę biegłą" o jej sprawdzenie oraz poprawienie. Odpowiedź muszę dostać do jutra godz. 14.
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Hello Ann!!!
Remember me? I was realy suprised when find your e-mail adress in my old notes. I'm mustn't thinking for long to decided to write to you. I'm sorry written for so long but I have been very busy. I had problem with my computer and next I were left to university in other city where I haven't access to internet... but I begin to start.

As i said - since October 2007 i have gone to new school. I'm study on psychology in Universyty of Wrocław. I'ts good. I've got great class and teachers, but I must learn a lot, more than in high school. Majority of free-time I spend in hostel where i live within study, but during the daytime i must work for money for tuition to study. I now work for a big property company as a seles manager - i sels a computer games. I absolutely love that i do, becouse i can work with peoples and i have some time for me and my boyfriend...... Oh! I forget to tell you about him!!!

His name is Michał and i met him in our work.We both like painting, interested architecture and psychology - of course. It's my on and only love!!! I dreaming hi will be my husband in future and we have many children, big garden and many orange tree ☺. Of course- not for always is that simply - everyboty knows that smonetimes even best relationships get ill... but it doen't matter when two peoples loves each other. Remember me for I show you our photos next time.

It's other think about i want to read you... on last birthday I've got a cat! What's a funny - we call him Ben, but it's a girl!!! She's very smart and humanity, 'cause hi loves to eat a chocolate (not only in shape of mouse)! It really hepling me in the evening when I feel lonely, because I didn't see my family after vacations.

But enough about me! How are you? I hope your things are well. You must to very changed after the last time we met on New's Year party in 2006. Maybe you can sand me some photos of you now? I'm interesting what you look.
By the way - how are your family and especially your little brother? Last time I saw his, hi was still in kindergarten and wants to be a polismen of something like that.

Well, I thing that's all the main news from me. Do write back - I'd love to hear your news.
Take care of yourself.

Lots of love,
XYX
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Aha, dodam jeszcze, ż…e jestem na poziomie intermediate (nie wiem jak to się stało ;)) i byłabym wdzięczna za urozmaicenie słownictwa.

Dziękuję serdecznie i pozdrawiam,
S.
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Postautor: annnabeth18@op.pl » 09 gru 2009, 1:27

Hey Kochana Co tam u Ciebie słychać nowego...?? :) Jak tam perełka Julcia?? słyszałam ostatnio ze była bardzo poważ…nie chora.. mam nadzieje ze juz wszystko jest ok.. :) i wogole jak tam ci sie mieszka z twoim m꿅ulkiem...:) jak bedziesz mniała czas to wpadnij do mnie pozdrawiam serdecznie i ucałuj malutka buzka
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Re: Sprawdzenie i poprawienie listu do przyjaciela

Postautor: Gość » 10 gru 2009, 2:58

do you remember me >? I was very surprised when I found your e-mail adress in my old notes. I didn't have to think too long to decide to write to you. I am sorry I haven't written for so long but I was very busy. I had problem with my computer (tego zdania nie rozumiem)

As I said in October I started new school. I study psychology in Wroclaw university e dalej mi się nie chce ale widzę błędy w czasach
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Re: Sprawdzenie i poprawienie listu do przyjaciela

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