Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu o przestępczości

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Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu o przestępczości

Postautor: gobi » 07 lut 2009, 19:35

Proszę o sprawdzenie:


Robbery is one o the most popular crimes. The police estimate that robbers commit about 45% criminal offences. Recently thiefs became more greedy and bold than at any time before. Increasing wave of the robbery forces us to protect our property against lawbreakers.
People know a lot of methods to guard them goods. The most simple way is have no precious things. If we don`t have anything nobody can rob us. However, I consider that it isn`t method which I would choose.
More and more people install alarm in home. Unfortunately home alarm is very expensive and only well-off person can afford it. Alarm`s running is very plain. If somebody unauthorized want to get in our home , system will turn on, alarm will scare robbers and notify the nearest police station.
Very popular and above all expectation effective solution is big and dread dog. Barking and slump teeth can effectively dissuade criminals from burglary. Dog demand from us much attention. Unfortunately offenders have a lot of manners for example poison or nerve gas which strikes down every dog.
Probably everyone know that the one reliable solution of protect doesn`t exist. We just have to pay attention and not parade of our property because a postern door makes a thief.

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Re: Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu o przestępczości

Postautor: barbsinlon » 08 lut 2009, 13:20

Robbery is one o the most COMMON crimes. The police estimate that robbers commit about 45% OF criminal offences. Recently THIEVES HAVE BEOMEN more greedy and bold than PREVIOUSLY. THE INCREASE ON robbery forces us to protect our property against THE law-breakers.
People know a lot of MEANS to guard THEIR goods/PROPERTY. The most simple way is TO POSESS no precious things. If we don`t have anything, nobody can STEAL IT FROM us. However, I DO NOT THINK that THIS IS method which I would choose.
More and more people install alarmS IN THEIR HOUSES. Unfortunately, A HOUSE alarm is very expensive and only well-off PEOPLE can afford it. Alarm`s SOUND is very MONOTONUS. If somebody unauthorized wantS to get inTO our HOUSE , THE ALARM system will GO OFF AND IT will scare THE robbers OFF and ALARM the nearest police station.
A big and SCARY dog IS ALSO A very popular and above all, AN effective WAY TO PROTECT ONE'S PROPERTY . Barking can effectively dissuade criminals from burglary. HOWEVER, DogS demand much attention. Unfortunately offenders have a lot of WAYS TO DEAL WITH THIS, for example THEY CAN poison or nerve gas which CAN PARALIZE A DOG.
Probably everyone knowS that theRE IS NO ONE AND ONLY reliable solution of THIS PROBLEM. We just have to pay attention and not parade of our property because a postern door makes a thief.

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Postautor: barbsinlon » 08 lut 2009, 13:21

Robbery is one o the most COMMON crimes. The police estimate that robbers commit about 45% OF criminal offences. Recently THIEVES HAVE BEOMEN more greedy and bold than PREVIOUSLY. THE INCREASE ON robbery forces us to protect our property against THE law-breakers.
People know a lot of MEANS to guard THEIR goods/PROPERTY. The most simple way is TO POSESS no precious things. If we don`t have anything, nobody can STEAL IT FROM us. However, I DO NOT THINK that THIS IS method which I would choose.
More and more people install alarmS IN THEIR HOUSES. Unfortunately, A HOUSE alarm is very expensive and only well-off PEOPLE can afford it. Alarm`s SOUND is very MONOTONUS. If somebody unauthorized wantS to get inTO our HOUSE , THE ALARM system will GO OFF AND IT will scare THE robbers OFF and ALARM the nearest police station.
A big and SCARY dog IS ALSO A very popular and above all, AN effective WAY TO PROTECT ONE'S PROPERTY . Barking can effectively dissuade criminals from burglary. HOWEVER, DogS demand much attention. Unfortunately offenders have a lot of WAYS TO DEAL WITH THIS, for example THEY CAN poison or nerve gas which CAN PARALIZE A DOG.
Probably everyone knowS that theRE IS NO ONE AND ONLY reliable solution of THIS PROBLEM. We just have to pay attention and not parade of our property because a postern door makes a thief.
barbsinlon
 



Re: Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu o przestępczości

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