Czy mógł by ktoś sprawdzić poprawność zdań ??

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Czy mógł by ktoś sprawdzić poprawność zdań ??

Postautor: KoZi87 » 28 sty 2010, 21:12

Od kilku lat nie miałem styczności z angielskim :beksa: więc nie wiem jak mi poszło po paru latach ( tylko bez "śmiaCia":hahaha: ).Zapisałem się do szkoły i mam taką pracę do wykonania "Napisz kilka zdań o sobie" lecz niestety nikt mi tego nie moż…e sprawdzić, więc proszę was o pomoc :bezradny:

My name is Lukas and I come from Mielec. It is a small town in the South of Poland. I am twenty two years old. I love music. I live in a block of flats with my parents and my sister. I don't like early getting up.

At the moment I'm unemployed and I'm looking for job, so I have a lot of free time. My usual day looks like this. I wake up at about 7 o'clock. I get up and take a shower at about 7:20. Then I eat my breakfast. I usually eat a corn flakes or sandwiches with ham. Then I do at home cleaning. Next I start study or I watch TV. Around 4pm o'clock I eat my dinner. Then I usually back to the previous schedule. I eat my supper and I go to bed around 11pm o'clock. In this moment I don’t work, so I have a lot of free time.

In my spare time I usually go out with my friends, but some time I play computer games or play station . I also love programming lots of tips from simple like small changing’s in programs, too changing soft in phones, or parts of programs, some time I write my own programs . Building programs, or part of program it is very difficult, because to make program, corporations spend many months, and they programming In specialists groups. I must do all alone, but when I make it, I become very happy. My hobbies are cinema, listening to the music (especially rock and metal), watching science, crime serials and thrillers movies.

I spend much time with my girlfriend. She is very funny, and smart. I think that she is a quite quiet and arranged girl. She’s always nice and happy girl. She's slim, tall and she’s beautiful .
She is so responsible that I can always count on Her. She love children and animals. She's very industrious. Last month She arrived to Spain for Christmas. She spent this time witch her mother. She stay in Spain and She start work. I love her very much, and I pining away after Her.


:stres: od razu mówię ,ż…e jestem przeraż…ony po tak długim czasie bez kontaktu z Anglikiem wszystko się moż…e po rąbać, więc proszę o wyrozumiałość (zaznaczam ż…e troszkę korzystałem również… z pomocy translatora i wiem jakie błędy się mogą z tym wiązać)

Z góry dziękuję za pomoc. :spoko:

Muszę to dostarczyć w najpóźniej w sobotę rano więc prosił bym o szybką pomoc.
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Re: Czy mógł by ktoś sprawdzić poprawność zdań ??

Postautor: Gość » 29 sty 2010, 3:14

My name is Lukas and I come from Mielec. It is a small town in the South of Poland. I am twenty two years old. I love music. I live in a block of flats with my parents and my sister. I don't like getting up early.

At the moment I'm unemployed and I'm looking for a job, so I have a lot of free time. My usual day looks like this. I wake up at about 7 o'clock. I get up and take a shower at about 7:20. Then I eat my breakfast. I usually eat corn flakes or sandwiches with ham. Then I clean my house(albo moż…esz napisać I do chores) . Next I start to study or I watch TV. Around 4pm o'clock I eat my dinner. Then I usually go back to the previous schedule. I eat my supper and I go to bed around 11pm o'clock. At the moment I don’t work, so I have a lot of free time.

In my spare time I usually go out with my friends, but sometimes I play computer games or playstation . I also love programming. From simple like small changes in programs, to changing software in phones, or parts of programs, sometimes I write my own programs . Building programs, or parts of programs is very difficult, because to make a program, corporations spend many months, and they need programming specialists that work in groups. I must do it all alone, but when I complete it, I feel very proud of myself. My hobbies are cinema, listening to music (especially rock and metal), watching science documentaries, television crime series and thriller movies.

I spend a lot of time with my girlfriend. She is very funny, and intelligent. I think that she is a quiet and well-organized girl( nie moze być arranged bo to dotyczy przedmiotów) . She’s tall and beautiful and has an amazing smile. She is responsible and I can always count on her. She loves children and animals. She's very industrious.Last month She went to Spain for Christmas. She spent it with her mother. She stayed in Spain and start work. I love her very much, and I miss her very much.

Tak ogólnie to nie było najgorzej :spoko:
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Re: Czy mógł by ktoś sprawdzić poprawność zdań ??

Postautor: . » 29 sty 2010, 3:19

Anonymous pisze:My name is Lukas and I come from Mielec. It is a small town in the South of Poland. I am twenty two years old. I love music. I live in a block of flats with my parents and my sister. I don't like getting up early.

At the moment I'm unemployed and I'm looking for a job, so I have a lot of free time. My usual day looks like this. I wake up at about 7 o'clock. I get up and take a shower at about 7:20. Then I eat my breakfast. I usually eat corn flakes or sandwiches with ham. Then I clean my house(albo moż…esz napisać I do chores) . Next I start to study or I watch TV. Around 4pm o'clock I eat my dinner. Then I usually go back to the previous schedule. I eat my supper and I go to bed around 11pm o'clock. At the moment I don’t work, so I have a lot of free time.

In my spare time I usually go out with my friends, but sometimes I play computer games or playstation . I also love programming. From simple like small changes in programs, to changing software in phones, or parts of programs, sometimes I write my own programs . Building programs, or parts of programs is very difficult, because to make a program, corporations spend many months, and they need programming specialists that work in groups. I must do it all alone, but when I complete it, I feel very proud of myself. My hobbies are cinema, listening to music (especially rock and metal), watching science documentaries, television crime series and thriller movies.

I spend a lot of time with my girlfriend. She is very funny, and intelligent. I think that she is a quiet and well-organized girl( nie moze być arranged bo to dotyczy przedmiotów) . She’s tall and beautiful and has an amazing smile. She is responsible and I can always count on her. She loves children and animals. She's very industrious.Last month She went to Spain for Christmas. She spent it with her mother. She stayed in Spain and start work. I love her very much, and I miss her very much.

Tak ogólnie to nie było najgorzej :spoko:


She spent it with her mother. She stayed in Spain and started working. I love her very much, and I miss her.
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Re: Czy mógł by ktoś sprawdzić poprawność zdań ??

Postautor: KoZi87 » 30 sty 2010, 2:09

Dzięki Wielkie!
Jesteście Wielcy.
:spoko:
Nie potrafię wyrazić wdzięczności za Szybką pomoc i miło mi słyszeć ż…e nie było tak źle :)
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Re: Czy mógł by ktoś sprawdzić poprawność zdań ??

Postautor: Gość » 09 lut 2010, 2:51

witam :papa:
muszę napisać krótką pracę na temat:

Only stricter traffic laws can prevent accidents. Do you agree or disagree?

nie jestem zbyt w tym dobry, coś wypociłem ale proszę o pomoc i sprawdzenie poprawności zdań. z góry dziękuję :spoko:

Nowdays, more then ever people are injured or die in car accidents.
There can be a lot of reasons of bad increase statistics.
One of them is definitely bad road condition, whitch is getting worst every next year. Secondly I think there should be more highways to avoid urban area's. It should make city's safer and help reduce pedestrian fatal accident's. Age of limit of young drivers should be raised to least 21.
A lot of teenagers are too irresponsible and great number of accidents are caused by them.
I think stricter traffic laws can prevent accidents, but it shouldn't be one and only solution of this problem.

proszę w miarę o szybką odp.
jeszcze raz dzięki :spoko:
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