Prosze o sprawdzenie moich dwóch raportów.
Jestem w klasie 3 gimnazjum, więc mój zasób słownictwa nie jest jakiś wieeelki



RAPORT1
To: Fergy Montana
From: Jan Kowalsky
Date: 10.09.2010
Subject: Attracting customers to Fergy’s supermarket.
Purpose
The purpose of this report is to suggest ways to attract more clients to Fergy’s supermarket.
Prices
Prices are not very competitive. You should offer lower prices, special offers and money-off coupons.
Service
Service is quite slow, so you should increase the number of checkouts.
Products
Range of products is not very broad. I think offer a wider range of products will help.
Opening Hours
Opening Hours are restricted. You have to open earlier in the morning and later at night, because I cannot buy buns before I go to school.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I think that to Fergy’s supermarket will come more people if it has lower prices, better service, more product and when it has been open longerly.
RAPORT 2
To: Fergy Montana
From: Jan Kowalsky
Date: 10.09.2010
Subject: Attracting customers to Helios in the Radom.
Purpose
The purpose of this report is to suggest ways to attract more clients to cinema.
Prices
Prices are not very competitive. You should offer lower prices and special.
Offers
I think that a good idea is special offer, for example ‘Birthday Party’ for children or ‘Meeting after work’
Eating
If I want to suffer (najeść się) I have to go somewhere else. I think you can make a restaurant or pizzeria because popcorn is too little for me.
Opening Hours
Opening Hours are restricted. I suggest to close later at night.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I think that to cinema Helios will come more people if it has lower prices, more offers, more eating offers.