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Dear Mr Kowalski,
Having obtained my MBA at Cracow University of Economics and graduated with Master’s degree in management. I believe I have essential experience and skills to take this vacancy. I can prove it with my achievements in previous job, where I have worked.
In my previous job as team manager in pharmacy company my team achieved more in one year than in past three years. We doubled incomes of our company. I improved skills of my staff by sending them on advanced trainings. I also participated in management training.
I am open to take my skills on higher level. I am fully focused on my career, which will help me to complete the objectives in your company. Jobs such as managing enhanced my formal education.
I would be happy to present my ideas in more details at interview I will call you next week to arrange a meeting. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me before then. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ