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Postautor: KubaPako » 13 sty 2012, 2:39

Jako pracę domową mam za zadanie odpowiedzieć na taki list:
Dear Ms Kellaway
I am writing to your blog as I would very much like your advice on a personal issue. Three years ago I resigned as a manager and since then I have thoroughly enjoyed more meaningful leisure activities such as gardening, fishing, writing and so on. However, lately, I have been concerned that my utopian existence is no longer sustainable, so I went to see a recruitment agency. When I explained the past three years to one of their staff, he looked completely shocked. I fear any future employer will react similarly. How should I present my current circumstances and curriculum vitae to best effect at the next interview?
Yours sincerely
MB
Unemployed, male, 41

A oto moja odpowiedź:
Dear Sir,
Thank you and I hope that my advice would be helpful. Your resignation of the manager was very unreasonable. If I were you I would explain that the reason for leaving the job was to collapse after the death of a loved one. At the interview you must demonstrate that already figured to yourself and you want as soon as possible to return to work.
Yours faithfully,
Lucy Kellaway

Proszę o wskazanie błędów ;)
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Postautor: marchefkka » 13 sty 2012, 6:38

- my advice WILL be helpful NIE would
- your resignation from the position of manager...
- was A collapse (? moze nie za dobre slowo)
demonstrate that...??? o co chodzi z tym figured?
moze... that you have dealt with your problems and...

- and you want to return to work as soon as possible
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Postautor: KubaPako » 13 sty 2012, 17:48

- was a collapse (tutaj chodziło mi o traumę, ale nie wiem jaki jest odpowiednik tego słowa w angielskim)
- you must demonstrate that already figured to yourself - musisz pokazać ż…e doszedłeś już… do siebie (w sensie ż…e po tej traumie, załamaniu)
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Postautor: marchefkka » 14 sty 2012, 0:09

slowo figured w ogole tu nie pasuje
moze byc np

you must demonstrate that you have already recovered after this difficult experience

- slowo collapse jest ok, moze predzej bym uzyla mental breakdown
albo chociaz okreslila collapse - mental collapse

(was a mental collapse after...)
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Postautor: KubaPako » 14 sty 2012, 1:04

Dzięki za pomoc :) Pozdrawiam :)
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