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[Visitor]

Kelly:Hi Jack!I was wondering-would you like to go to the rock musical "Queen" tonight?
Jack:That sounds nice but I'm afraid I'cant.I've got to do homework.
Kelly:Jack,listen!I have two trickets.There is topping musical!The concert is begun about twenty'o clock in Club Explosion.You must go!
Jack:Well,I will make homework after concert the "Queen".Where we are meeting?
Kelly:I will wait at my hose about seventh in the evening.
Jack:Ok,Ihave take drinks?
Kelly:No,there is bar.
Jack:Very good.Bye!See you later.
Kelly!Bye!

[Visitor]

Kelly:Hi Jack!I was wondering if/whether you'd like to go to the rock musical "Queen" tonight?

Jack:That sounds nice but I'm afraid I'cant.I've got to do homework.

Kelly:Jack,listen up!I have two trickets.There is topping musical!The concert begins about twenty'o clock in Club Explosion. Come with me, please [imo better]

Jack:Well,I will make homework after the concert .Where wil we meet?

Kelly:I will wait at my house about seven o'clock in the evening.

Jack:Ok, do I have to take something to drink ?

Kelly:No,there is a bar.

Jack:Very good. see you !

Kelly : see you!

IMO better

[Visitor]

Dziękuję!!:)

[Visitor]

...
the concert starts about 8pm in the Explosion club.
Well, I'll do my homework after the concert. Where do you want to meet?
I'll wait for you at my house. Be there around 7pm.
Ok, do I have to take anything to drink?

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