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Prosze o korekte

Postautor: Potrafie » 12 paź 2008, 22:01

Every poeple on the world like to listen the music. My favourite type of music is hip-hop and rock.Especially i like listen this kind of music before football match.This give me bravery and dynamism.I dont have favourite bands and single.Usually i listen new songs beacouse old songs they are already boring. When i listing a music i can relax and rest a power. As I listen to slowly song i have nice mood and as i listen ast song i have aggressive mood.I often buying music discs that music bands have increment and create new album.I hate music with not meaning.
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Re: Prosze o korekte

Postautor: xeo » 12 paź 2008, 22:29

ALL OF THE poeple IN the world like LISTENING TO music. My favourite type of music is hip-hop and rock. I like LISTENING TO this kind of music ESPECIALLY before football matchES. This giveS me bravery and dynamism. I don't have favourite bands and singERS. I USUALLY listen TO new songs BECAUSE old songs are boring NOWADAYS. When I LISTEN TO music I can relax and GATHER NEW STRENGHT. WHEN I listen to a calm song I AM in A GOOD mood and WHEN I listen TO A LIVELY song I AM IN AN aggressive mood. I often BUY CDs... (nie wiem co tam chciałeś dalej napisać z tymi zespołami). I hate music WITHOUT meaning.
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