Sprawdzenie listu :)) Ewentualna korekta gramatyczna :D

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Sprawdzenie listu :)) Ewentualna korekta gramatyczna :D

Postautor: Cartel » 08 gru 2008, 19:14

Dear sister
Im sorry I haven't written to you for such a long time but I've been very busy. I want to tell you many interesting and important things! The most important news is that finally my friend and I, we found nice flat in Kraków. Block of flats where we live stands near the street so it's very noisy place. But on luck our school is 10minutes way from here. Now I want to write you something about this flat. The rent isn't high but every months additionaly we must pay electric and internet bills. At first day in our new flat we decided that we have to paint walls in living room. Why? Becouse old colour of walls was awful. Don't worry. Cost wasn't big. Only 100zł. Finally I must write you about room which I share with my friend. The room is huge! We have there two beds, two desks, one big case and TV. There are a lot of plants. It looks fantastic. Particularly important is that this room is very sunny :) I must finish this letter but you must know I will be really happy if you could come visit me in Kraków.

Kisses ! Matthew :D

Ciekaw jestem ile byków narobiłem... :) Wiem, ż…e list nie łączy się w piekny literacki sposób i niektóre momenty są jakby wyrwane, ale pisałem go w dosyć szybkim tempie... :oops:
Mam nadzieje, ż…e znajdzie się dobra duszyczka, która pomoż…e i wskaż…e mi w którym miejscu, jakie błędy zrobiłem i jak należ…y je naprawic ;))
TIA Matthew :)
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Re: Sprawdzenie listu :)) Ewentualna korekta gramatyczna :D

Postautor: Gość » 10 gru 2008, 11:25

block of flats where we live stands
raczej: block of flats where we live is located
The rent isn't high but every months additionaly we must pay electric and internet bills.
raczej:The rent isn't high but every month we must additionaly pay electric and internet bills
because nie becose
Cost wasn't big.
It didn't cost a lot
We have there two beds, two desks, one big case and TV.
We have two beds, two desks, one big case and TV there.
you could come visit me in Kraków.
you could come to visit me in Kraków.

tak mi się wydaje ;)
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Re: Sprawdzenie listu :)) Ewentualna korekta gramatyczna :D

Postautor: littlegreenhat » 10 gru 2008, 12:01

Cartel pisze:Dear sister
Im sorry I haven't written to you for such a long time but I've been very busy. I want to tell you many interesting and important things! The most important news is that finally my friend and I, we found nice flat in Kraków. Block of flats where we live stands near the street so it's very noisy place. But on luck our school is 10minutes way from here. Now I want to write you something about this flat. The rent isn't high but every months additionaly we must pay electric and internet bills. At first day in our new flat we decided that we have to paint walls in living room. Why? Becouse old colour of walls was awful. Don't worry. Cost wasn't big. Only 100zł. Finally I must write you about room which I share with my friend. The room is huge! We have there two beds, two desks, one big case and TV. There are a lot of plants. It looks fantastic. Particularly important is that this room is very sunny :) I must finish this letter but you must know I will be really happy if you could come visit me in Kraków.

Kisses ! Matthew :D

Ciekaw jestem ile byków narobiłem... :) Wiem, ż…e list nie łączy się w piekny literacki sposób i niektóre momenty są jakby wyrwane, ale pisałem go w dosyć szybkim tempie... :oops:
Mam nadzieje, ż…e znajdzie się dobra duszyczka, która pomoż…e i wskaż…e mi w którym miejscu, jakie błędy zrobiłem i jak należ…y je naprawic ;))
TIA Matthew :)


I'm sorry I haven't written to you for such a long time but I was very busy. I want to tell you many interesting and important news! The most important is that my friend and I have finally found a nice flat in Kraków. The flat is near the street and because of that it's a very noisy place. However our school is situated nearby and it takes us only 10 minutes to get there, so it is not so bad after all. The rent is quite low, but every month we additionally have to pay for electricity and the internet. Also, we had to paint the living room, because the old colour was awful. But don't worry, the cost was not high, only 100zl. My bedroom that I share with my friend is very sunny and huge! We have there two beds, two desks, one big case and a TV. There is also a lot of plants. It all looks fantastic! I hope someday you will visit me and see it all for yourself.

Best regards Matthew

Starałam się trzymać oryginału, jednak niektóre rzeczy musiałam trochę pozmieniać, ż…eby list miał "ręce i nogi". Mam nadzieję, ż…e pomogłam.
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